Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

This sounds to me like it would make a terrific song. It is very poetic and very romantic, and the words are lyrical. I liked the repeating chorus, it fits in well. Giddy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi Giddy,
thank you my friend for your fine review and the excellent rating, all of which is appreciated. Have a good one and take care.
Kindest thoughts,
James

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Exceptional

your wife is very lucky to have you and clearly visa versa. Love the fact you were moved to write these beautiful words after 23 years. Wishing you happiness always, lots of love, Connie xxx

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi Eph and Connie,
thank you for your beautiful sentiments. We had a wonderful day in every way... And I know how lucky I am to have such love in my life... I must have done something right, right?
As always I thank you for your support and wonderful reviews, you are truly appreciated.
Thank you so much for the gold you lay at my feet, I am honored
Kindest loving thoughts,
James xxx

Comment from NicciFaye

Exceptional

I thought this was not only loving but sexy. I personally like

Want to cover you in body breeze

And give you love with endless tease

I'll take you places you only dreamed

My only goal... Just to please

I was like.....body breeze that's deep. Six for you friend

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi Nicci,
my favorite lines too. Thank you so much for the way in which you honor my love. I am touched at the way you received it.
I appreciate your reviews and this was a beautiful surprise, thank you. The beautiful gold made it all that much sweeter.
Kindest thoughts,
James

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh James, how supremely wonderful! I sincerely wish you and your wife the very best on your anniversary - thirty years together is marvelous, and your beautiful sentiment is obviously a big reason.

What a lovely poem!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi Dawn,
as always, thank you my dear friend, this was a wonderful review.
We had a wonderful day, all day!
I hope your weekend is going well and your writing muse is flowing with the brilliance of your soul.
I can't wait for your next chapter, yeah you know the one...
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

This is a beautiful tribute and Love Poem. The words
flow nicely and it is easy to read. The emotions are
powerful and the passion is sincere. The attach photo
is a giant mirror that reflects the message. Thank
You for your creation.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi Black O,
thank you so much for this fine review and the stars that accompany it, it is truly appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James

Comment from Cookie333

Excellent

This one sang to me as I read it, how great is that?
I am happily married and will celebrate 30 years in July
Thank you for sharing with us
K

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi Cookie,
congratulations, for nearly reaching 30 years, where have the years flown too?
Thank you for sinning along, I bet that you sounded better than me. The dogs haven't stopped howling since I put it to music. LOL
Thank you so much for a beautiful review and the stars that accompanied it.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

reply by Cookie333 on 16-Jun-2013

I am afraid that I can't carry a tune in a hand basket, but I do love to sing.
you are very welcome friend.
k

Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

Wow! You show that it is possible to have a happy marriage. That's an example for many couples today that don't believe that a marriage can last. Kudos to you and your wife for proving otherwise.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013

Hi JM,
thanks for the sentiments my good friend.
You know how much I appreciate your reviews and on-going support.
Sorry I'm a bit behind on my reviews, I'm way behind and I can't seem to catch up. But no matter I will keep plugging on so just know they will come! Take care.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

reply by JM daSilva on 16-Jun-2013

I know. Don't worry about anything. Have a nice day.

Comment from 4tun81

Excellent

Congratulations on a successful 30 year relationship and a well written tribute to your love. I think you are keenly aware of what you need to do to last another 30 years. Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013

Hi Fortunate 1,
thank you for your wonderful review and your kind sentiments, we appreciate it very much. Hope your weekend is a beautiful one,take care.
Kindest thoughts,
James

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I love this and especially the author notes. I like that you still feel this way after 30 years together. I like the photo too.
Thank you and God bless.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013

Hi Jenny,
thanks very much for this wonderful review and your sentiments too.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

This piece is a beautiful tribute to the love of your life. Your words are perfect in bringing your thoughts to the reader. It was easy to read and understand because the flow was pretty good. It held my attention very well, and I found no errors. I enjoyed reading this piece. It was excellent.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013

Hi Eigle,
thank you for your fine review and your excellent rating, most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James