My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A Haven or Hell. "All of my poems of release.
11 total reviews
Comment from mikenbel
Hey Jaq - very nicely done. I like the minimal lines and the minimal punctuation. I have learned a lot while at this site - among other things not to be a strict Canonite but to appreciate the art form.
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Hey Jaq - very nicely done. I like the minimal lines and the minimal punctuation. I have learned a lot while at this site - among other things not to be a strict Canonite but to appreciate the art form.
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thanks B, you are a great support and friend. :) hugs Jaq xx
Comment from kiwijenny
I like the imagery and I fully concur that words either cut or heal . They are powerful. I liked the last lines the best.
Thank you for beautiful imagery.
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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I like the imagery and I fully concur that words either cut or heal . They are powerful. I liked the last lines the best.
Thank you for beautiful imagery.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thank you so much kiwijenny, it's always nice to hear someone's thoughts on my poems. Hugs, Jaq xxx
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jaq, a powerful post and well penned as always. Thought provoking post - though usually those that need the shake up don't see the lesson or the guidance.
Stand strong girl.:)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Hi Jaq, a powerful post and well penned as always. Thought provoking post - though usually those that need the shake up don't see the lesson or the guidance.
Stand strong girl.:)
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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I can only hope it reaches the right people Maureen, but I guess even if they did read it they would indeed miss the point. Thanks once again girlie, hugs JAq xxx
Comment from J. Dark
This is an interesting and thought-provoking free verse, Jaq. Words are powerful tools which can be used to persuade and manipulate or alternatively reassure or soothe. Their effect upon us is quite sublime, when you consider it is only language. Well written - I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Kindest of och aye the nu regards,
Julie :-)
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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This is an interesting and thought-provoking free verse, Jaq. Words are powerful tools which can be used to persuade and manipulate or alternatively reassure or soothe. Their effect upon us is quite sublime, when you consider it is only language. Well written - I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Kindest of och aye the nu regards,
Julie :-)
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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LMAO, I'm loving your command of the Scottish language :). It's getting better and better. Now remember tae steer yer porridge wi' ah spurtle hen.
Thanks for the very kind review and rating my friend. Hugs, Jaq xx
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Whoops - I just got feathers in my breakfast!! :-)
Comment from reconciled
This reminds me of the age old adage "liar liar pants on fire"...and..."stupid head"...-wink- Hi...Jaq. Exceptionally well written. I think that's probably why I don't hate her....it wasn't like that.....not that I'm aware of anyway. Yea, that would make me cold as a stone. Anyway Lady, you are a wealthy woman with a treasure of love to share....do not fret in despair , your Romeo awaits around the corner for his love with golden heart and soft curled hair.... its early-wink- lol love you Michael
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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This reminds me of the age old adage "liar liar pants on fire"...and..."stupid head"...-wink- Hi...Jaq. Exceptionally well written. I think that's probably why I don't hate her....it wasn't like that.....not that I'm aware of anyway. Yea, that would make me cold as a stone. Anyway Lady, you are a wealthy woman with a treasure of love to share....do not fret in despair , your Romeo awaits around the corner for his love with golden heart and soft curled hair.... its early-wink- lol love you Michael
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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LOL, Michael you are such a sweetheart. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm a wee bit sad because two people were banned today for speaking the truth. Mikenbel was banned for standing up for Indie and the injustice she suffered. I am leaving soon, as it seems, that to cheat is acceptable behaviour. Thank goodness there are more like you than the other one.
Love ya, Jaq xxx
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend words can be so many things some times up lifting sometimes damaging they are a strong weapon well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend words can be so many things some times up lifting sometimes damaging they are a strong weapon well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thank you so very much Jill for another great review my friend. :) Jaq xxx
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration and strong verb choices in deceive and drag
good alliteration in watched as I withered, and I like the rhyme with slithered
Powerful expression of heartfelt emotion in good poetic form :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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good alliteration and strong verb choices in deceive and drag
good alliteration in watched as I withered, and I like the rhyme with slithered
Powerful expression of heartfelt emotion in good poetic form :-) Brooke
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Once again Brooke another wonderful review. Thanks you so much for reading. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Jean Lutz
Indeed words do leave a lasting mark on the soul. With this creation you have said a lot and managed to deliver it all in an attractive binding. I love the artwork. I miss the days of pen and ink.
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Indeed words do leave a lasting mark on the soul. With this creation you have said a lot and managed to deliver it all in an attractive binding. I love the artwork. I miss the days of pen and ink.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Yes Jean, words can soothe or sadden. Thanks for your review. Hugs, Jaq xx
Comment from Scarbrems
A sad, haunting poem, full of hurt. Yes, words can be brutal, but don't let them break you. You write so very eloquently, my friend
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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A sad, haunting poem, full of hurt. Yes, words can be brutal, but don't let them break you. You write so very eloquently, my friend
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thank you so very much Sarkems. Your review means a lot. Hugs, Jaq xx
Comment from lorijean
Love your poem, such a good subject, the power of words, they can heal, they can kill, a great read again and thank you for sharing...
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reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Love your poem, such a good subject, the power of words, they can heal, they can kill, a great read again and thank you for sharing...
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Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-May-2013
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Thanks lorijean words can cut you down or build you up indeed. Jaq xx
