My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Beautiful Release."All of my poems of release.
22 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
I can relate to the despair one might feel but I've never been to the depths that might make me think of self harm. I do understand though, there are those who visit that possibitlity frequently. That must be hard to cope with. I hope your niece gets help through this and most importantly comes out the other side with all the right reasons to live.
Good luck with the battle. Cheers P x
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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I can relate to the despair one might feel but I've never been to the depths that might make me think of self harm. I do understand though, there are those who visit that possibitlity frequently. That must be hard to cope with. I hope your niece gets help through this and most importantly comes out the other side with all the right reasons to live.
Good luck with the battle. Cheers P x
Comment Written 03-May-2013
reply by the author on 03-May-2013
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She will be fine thanks Pip, it's a heartrending condition. She is beautiful, gorgeous figure, great singer... yet no confidence, no idea of what she has. Lack of confidence must be genetic LMAO. Thanks again girlie for your best wishes, Jaq xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I have friends who do this as well, so heartbreaking. I hate it and hope they find peace in less destructive ways. This is very well done, great rhyme and flow, I see no errors. Good job. Rox
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I have friends who do this as well, so heartbreaking. I hate it and hope they find peace in less destructive ways. This is very well done, great rhyme and flow, I see no errors. Good job. Rox
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thanks Roxanna, if we could bring awareness then it can only be a good thing. Jaq xx
Comment from poetic1988
this is a beautiful written poem,
I like this poem because, this is a poem I feel I can relate & put myself in there. self harm can be hard to understand especially for the one's who don't use it
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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this is a beautiful written poem,
I like this poem because, this is a poem I feel I can relate & put myself in there. self harm can be hard to understand especially for the one's who don't use it
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for a great and empathetic review. I hope things improve for anyone doing this. Jaq xx
Comment from GWinterwin
This is a great writing about something no doubt very hard for many to understand. Your good word flow and rhyming tell a sad but real story. The torment one must go through that has this problem. We must not condemn someone like this, but love them even more and strive to help them to overcome whatever causes this problem. Great writing, thank you for sharing God bless always.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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This is a great writing about something no doubt very hard for many to understand. Your good word flow and rhyming tell a sad but real story. The torment one must go through that has this problem. We must not condemn someone like this, but love them even more and strive to help them to overcome whatever causes this problem. Great writing, thank you for sharing God bless always.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much GW. We must indeed try to understand more. God Bless you also... Jaq xx
Comment from Jade Lawson
Thank you for sharing such creation... Self-harm it is a very serious problem, not only physically but also an emotional one.
You reach the emotions of the reader very well, I could feel the strong words, and the anguish.
I loved the rhyming and the enjambment that you display this poem. The first stanza is my favourite.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for sharing such creation... Self-harm it is a very serious problem, not only physically but also an emotional one.
You reach the emotions of the reader very well, I could feel the strong words, and the anguish.
I loved the rhyming and the enjambment that you display this poem. The first stanza is my favourite.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much Angel. Much appreciated. Jaq xx
Comment from l.raven
HI Jaq, One of the girls in my son-in-laws family used to cut herself all the time. Therphy just didn't seem to help. This is very well written. And you explained it very well. How sad to feel that why. very well done!! Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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HI Jaq, One of the girls in my son-in-laws family used to cut herself all the time. Therphy just didn't seem to help. This is very well written. And you explained it very well. How sad to feel that why. very well done!! Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Linda many thanks indeed for your wonderfully undestanding review. It is a hard thing to see a family member go through. lotsa love, Jaq xx
Comment from mikenbel
I really like this poem, albeit the dark subject matter. It is very well written, and the rhyming improves and enhances the flow.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I really like this poem, albeit the dark subject matter. It is very well written, and the rhyming improves and enhances the flow.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much mikenbel, as always your words are appreciated. :) Jaq x
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This poetry transports the reader to a dark and scary
place. I like the way that the words are arranged on
the page. The reader-friendly language makes it easy
to comprehend. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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This poetry transports the reader to a dark and scary
place. I like the way that the words are arranged on
the page. The reader-friendly language makes it easy
to comprehend. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your very kind review B__O much appreciated, Jaq xxx
Comment from NicciFaye
Wow...that Is a well expressed beautiful release. Interesting spin on cutting of the wrist, more metaphoric, well described. Loved it. God bless.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Wow...that Is a well expressed beautiful release. Interesting spin on cutting of the wrist, more metaphoric, well described. Loved it. God bless.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thanks Nicci it's an important subject. I appreciate your reading this xxx
Comment from Val Crisson
I have niece that was the same way, and as your poem indicates it's not so simple where the problem lies. This is a very powerfully written poem on the subject of maiming oneself. Mental illness is such an ignored subject universally and we really need to change that.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I have niece that was the same way, and as your poem indicates it's not so simple where the problem lies. This is a very powerfully written poem on the subject of maiming oneself. Mental illness is such an ignored subject universally and we really need to change that.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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We do indeed Val. I hope your niece get's the help she needs. Thank you for your review. Jaq xx
