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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Thelma and Louise."
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from Indie Skreet
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LMAO - just notice the video with this! This is brilliant Jaq and IS A SIX STAR! I have already used up, but know it honey - I love this and of course you too. Big THANK YOU, Indie xxx

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
    Indie thanks so much for this great review. I'm so glad you liked this bit of fun. Love n hugs Jaq xxx
Comment from gazzagodbod
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Lol Devin loved them even put out extra road kill for them great picture and I wondered where all the donut crumbs on their bonnet had come from lol great write sixer for you my friend xxgazzagodbodxx

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
    Thanks for that gazza. All us NHS types must have the same sense of humour :) xx
reply by gazzagodbod on 28-Apr-2013
    Think you got a point there my friend xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2013
    :) x
Comment from Scarbrems
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ha ha, this is fun, loved the film and loved your poem, especially the reference to FS members at the end. You've made me laugh this morning, thank you

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
    I thank you too emsey. They will be creating havoc no doubt about it. :) Jaq xxx
Comment from reconciled
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lol...hey Jaq....yea I had me a "Thelma and Louise" moment...just recently....but...I was Thelma's husband...you know..."What?...wh wh what?.....-head tilt-...huh? lmbo- Anyway...England...hold your horses...its gonna be a loooooong weekend. Hope they have a wonderful time... love you Michael

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
    Lmao you are the best. Thanks for reviewing xxxx
reply by reconciled on 27-Apr-2013
    My pleasure...-smile-
Comment from October21
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LOL! Fun poem about Julie and Indie, and all their fun and wacky adventures... They make quite the entertaining best friends! It's so cool that they met here:) xx

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Lol Shenel they are a great pair xx
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Lol Shenel they are a great pair xx
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Well, this was a frolicking little piece of perpetual peregrination, was it not? Ah, but please, let's not forget the fate that befell those two heroines. I can only hope that your travels lead you both to a much happier destination.
Kudos!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Lol Dean, it's for two of the nicest people I've 'met' on here, although I have 'met' quite a few. Indie and Mrs Dark are a pair of fun-loving ladies. I'm sure they will have so much fun on this road-trip. Thanks again for your review. :) Jaq xx
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the two transpiring to create havoc, i enjoyed reading it. i know they'll get a kick out of it.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Cheers SWJ your review is much appreciated. I'm sure Devon will never be the same after this weekend :) xx
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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LOL ... Even when Indie is not around she "is around".

The pic is a scream and so well suited to your poem about Indie and Julie. Yes, no doubt those two will be up to something. :)

This was a fun write with very good rhyme and flow. It grabbed the reader's attention immediately and held it through until the end.

bichonfrisegirl aka Connie

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Lmao I couldn't resist Connie I spoke to them when they had set off and Indie was repeating all the instructions the sat nav was saying just to make sure Julie was listening. Hahahahaha. The blind leading the partially-sighted comes to mind :). Thanks for the fab review, Jaq xx
reply by bichonfrisegirl on 26-Apr-2013
    Lucy and Ethel comes to mind as well as Thelma and Louise. :)

    Connie
    xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Hahahaha yea I guess. I'll bet they have a blast xx
Comment from lorijean
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Go girls, go cause havoc and enjoy, a great poem with an good warning, with these girls on the loose who knows what may happen.....

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Lol Lori maximum mayhem could ensue xxx Thanks for your review x
Comment from Rondeno
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Good fun, hun. You've got a wee typo on "Cornwall", not that it matters. I noticed those two were drawing closer. Good luck to them.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2013
    Thanks I better go change it. It is just a wee bit of a laugh xx