Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Ms Jaq C,
loved the way you took out your aggravations out in the format of a poem. A great rehearsal for the real situation. I have personally walked out on any job that hinders my comfort zones. I know monies are tight but health is something that doesn't come back readily. Egos sure do get in the way of a productive outcome. Good luck in your endeavors and great write, wish I had a six for you, sorry.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013

Your words are more than enough jj thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated xx

Comment from Alexmi1984

Exceptional

Ah, the joys of being self-employed. Of course, the money isn't pouring like rain on London but the mind is at ease, at all times. With that out of my reviewing way, I applaud the quality of this poetic satire (if I may consider it like that) and can't say anything (and that's saying something...) about any issues related to it.

Alex :)

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Alex you are a wee star. Many thanks for this fantastic review and rating my friend :) Jaq xx

Comment from October21

Excellent

Ah... Never had a boss before, as I'm still at school - thank god - but one day I will and I hope she's not as horrible as this one is LOL! Lovely poem
Jaq xx

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Lol Shenel, sometimes you just have to vent ;-) Thanks for reading :) Jaq xxxx

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this reads very well you expressed your thoughts and feelings in this fun poem it is well written and I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

That's nice Jill. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :) Jaq x

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

This poem moves well, you started off quite calm and I could gradually feel you getting angry, it comes across really well.....

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thank you so much lorijean as always. Sometimes you just have to let off a wee bit of steam :) Jaq xx

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

LMAO Jaq lol lol lol. Revenge is so sweet and none so more as when one can pen to perfection such as this and share with others. Now please, when you leave, you must print a copy and stick it in a cheapy frame as a parting gift. lol. Well done Honey, Indie xxx

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Hahahahahah Indie you have given me an idea. I must make sure I have any job I may get tied down in contract before I do though. Thanks for the pointers hon, Love n stuff Jaq xxx

reply by Indie Skreet on 16-Apr-2013

lol speak later I'm sure :) xx

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

A wonderfull tell, perfect in a humoric delivery, I am impressed with the study rhyme structure and tickled with. DEAR, SCREW YOU

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thank you so much Ronnie, much appreciated xx

Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

Very amusing! If I may say, your command of rhyme and meter is now very assured. You can manipulate the verse to make it say what you want. All too many "poets" have the verse manipulate them!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks so much hon, great to hear from you. I did have a wee help but it's getting less so. :) xxx

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a powerful piece of poetry! not getting along with a colleague or boss to say the least must be quite daunting..
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks Rebekka, some day are better than others. :) Jaq xx

Comment from Enrique28

Excellent

A very amusing story in verse I dare say probably inspired by experience. Imaginative language and poetic sounds throughout, and a very apt illustration. Well done! Enrique

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2013

Thanks Enrique28, much appreciated :) Jaq x