My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Beyond Reproach"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from October21
Ah... Sometimes when we love someone we do everything we can to be with them, even if there a million reasons why we shouldn't, even if the universe doesn't want us to be. That's how strong we feel, and we can't ignore it or leave ourselves without the someone who makes us feel so deeply. This just aches with emotion- loved it, you write stuff that I like, that I enjoy reading:) xx
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Ah... Sometimes when we love someone we do everything we can to be with them, even if there a million reasons why we shouldn't, even if the universe doesn't want us to be. That's how strong we feel, and we can't ignore it or leave ourselves without the someone who makes us feel so deeply. This just aches with emotion- loved it, you write stuff that I like, that I enjoy reading:) xx
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Thank you so nuch Shenel as ever your words are wonderful and ean so much xxx
Comment from reconciled
Hey Jaq...how are you? Brilliant write.....got to be careful with that cause usually there are othere feelings involed....ya fellings that can last a life time...so you really got to be careful love you girl Michael
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Hey Jaq...how are you? Brilliant write.....got to be careful with that cause usually there are othere feelings involed....ya fellings that can last a life time...so you really got to be careful love you girl Michael
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Aww hon it is just a poem. Thanks for your review sweetie xxx
Comment from Gungalo
if I had this time
to live anew
I'd do the same
and lie with
you
Some things are just worth it. To have the change to lie with a man that makes you feel like a real woman is a chance of a life time.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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if I had this time
to live anew
I'd do the same
and lie with
you
Some things are just worth it. To have the change to lie with a man that makes you feel like a real woman is a chance of a life time.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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It is indeed Gungalo as you well know girl. Much appreciated xxx
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Smile.
Comment from lorijean
A lusty love poem, love make the world go around and sometimes make it stop, well written with lots of emotion, love with conquer all.....
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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A lusty love poem, love make the world go around and sometimes make it stop, well written with lots of emotion, love with conquer all.....
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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It does indeed lorijean. Many thanks once again xx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend you have done well with the feeling of this poem so much emotion I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Yes this is well written my friend you have done well with the feeling of this poem so much emotion I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thanks you so much for your lovely words Jill, much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Rondeno
With a breathless rush, the woman (subject of the poem) defiantly affirms her allegiance to her man, no matter what the world may say. It's illicit, but love has its own law. Great poem!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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With a breathless rush, the woman (subject of the poem) defiantly affirms her allegiance to her man, no matter what the world may say. It's illicit, but love has its own law. Great poem!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Thanks for that Michael :) Always nice to have your thoughts xx Jaq
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Aren't you talking to me today?
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Yes I'm just home :) x
