Comment from Earl of Oxford

Excellent

Hi, Jaq.

Very simple, in the best way, vision of those delicate and special 'gossamer wings in flight', to describe the dainty and special flutter of the butterfly.

My only problem, is they eat shit, the same as flies. Oh well, no-one's perfect. LOL.

Nice one. Ray x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

Lmao, trust you :). I didn't get one vote for it :( hahahahaha never mind eh? ;-) xxx

reply by Earl of Oxford on 04-Apr-2013

I know the feeling, Jaq. In 2 of my last 3 contests, I've received zero votes.

Oh well, it's not our fault the voters are dummies...or just plain jealous and scared of our superior ability Haha. xx

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

I had to look up your word, gossamer, and I like it. The wings of a butterfly do look so delicate, and yet they can fly and share their beauty with many places. Excellent haiku!

Patricia

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013

Thank you so much Patricia xx

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written you paint a picture with your words very colorful and beautiful well done good luck in the contest regards Jill

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

As ever your words are apprciated Jill :) xx

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

As ever your words are apprciated Jill :) xx

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

A lovely work with perfect syllables. I enjoyed this especially since I am partial to butterflies.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen

"butterfly 3
gossamer beauty 5
wings in flight " 3

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

Thanks so much Maureen as always much appreciated :)