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Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Veni, Vidi, Vici"All of my poems of release.
10 total reviews
Comment from words
Love this one.
The title brought back all of those years in Latin class. LOL
Love your ending:Veni, Vidi, Vici,
I relinquished
all to you.
Yes, passion does feel like this.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Love this one.
The title brought back all of those years in Latin class. LOL
Love your ending:Veni, Vidi, Vici,
I relinquished
all to you.
Yes, passion does feel like this.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much D. Much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from GarthL
Beautiful visual presentation before I even got near the words Jaq but they didn't let me down either. A lovely way to admit that you've been smitten and it feels safe and complete for you. Well done, a smooth read that was enjoyable thank you. Liked the use of the Latin theme!!
LiveLove, Garth xox
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Beautiful visual presentation before I even got near the words Jaq but they didn't let me down either. A lovely way to admit that you've been smitten and it feels safe and complete for you. Well done, a smooth read that was enjoyable thank you. Liked the use of the Latin theme!!
LiveLove, Garth xox
Comment Written 24-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much for all your support and great reviews Garth. Peace n Love my friend xxx
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And to you Jaq!!!xox
Comment from reconciled
What that mean...vinie vinie victor? Hey Jaq....-smile- wow we...somebody got your attention evidently....my goodness reliquenshing stuff and everything...wow. Well....it should've happened to a nicer guy...-smile- love you Michael
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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What that mean...vinie vinie victor? Hey Jaq....-smile- wow we...somebody got your attention evidently....my goodness reliquenshing stuff and everything...wow. Well....it should've happened to a nicer guy...-smile- love you Michael
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2013
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LMAO Michael, cheers for a great fun review as ever. Love ya, Jaq xx
Comment from Rondeno
What a delightful poem! Total abandonment to love - who could ask for a more intense experience? And the poet captures it perfectly. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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What a delightful poem! Total abandonment to love - who could ask for a more intense experience? And the poet captures it perfectly. Well done!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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This is what I was hoping for. Thank you for your insightful review xxx
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Are you around, mo chara?
Comment from angelface2
Sounds kind of like a new love is beginning here, or maybe not. A nice love poem of passion. Good work. It seems to flow very well. Nice. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Sounds kind of like a new love is beginning here, or maybe not. A nice love poem of passion. Good work. It seems to flow very well. Nice. Miss Sally
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thank you Miss Sally, your words are appreciated indeed. :) Jaq x
Comment from Indie Skreet
methinks a historic write Jaq. I can only hazard a guess at the inspiration, but I will stay sshh for once, just in case I am mistaken :) beautifully done - so very well done, warmly Indie xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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methinks a historic write Jaq. I can only hazard a guess at the inspiration, but I will stay sshh for once, just in case I am mistaken :) beautifully done - so very well done, warmly Indie xx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thanks Indie and yes you may be right of course. Hope you've had a good day girlie :) Jaq xx
Comment from Gungalo
I lay alone but knew
that soon, you'd
join me and we'd
play.
Great write here. I like the Veni, Vidi, Vici theme too. Great love poem and I love that you wrote it on the vertical.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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I lay alone but knew
that soon, you'd
join me and we'd
play.
Great write here. I like the Veni, Vidi, Vici theme too. Great love poem and I love that you wrote it on the vertical.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Gungalo always appreciated xx
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Smile girl.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Great work again my MS J I like how wove this into another passionate prose You are really good with words or have had a lot passion in your life Or maybe both I think So you deserve a Tarnished Knights special Croc Award
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Great work again my MS J I like how wove this into another passionate prose You are really good with words or have had a lot passion in your life Or maybe both I think So you deserve a Tarnished Knights special Croc Award
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Lol TK thank you so much. Maybe it's just what I'd like it to be ;) Jaq x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written my friend and has a loving feel to the poem it reads very well and is enhanced by the beautiful presentation well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Yes this is very well written my friend and has a loving feel to the poem it reads very well and is enhanced by the beautiful presentation well done regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Cheers Jill for a lovely review as always.:) Jaq xx
Comment from October21
Ah... Another brilliant poem. I'm feeling a slight romance vibe- may be wrong though. "Your voice the key to all that made my day"- so sweet. Sometimes there is only one person who can vanquish our worries and make us feel whole:-)
Apologies for brief review, I've been reviewing pretty much all day and am starting to feel a little tired xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Ah... Another brilliant poem. I'm feeling a slight romance vibe- may be wrong though. "Your voice the key to all that made my day"- so sweet. Sometimes there is only one person who can vanquish our worries and make us feel whole:-)
Apologies for brief review, I've been reviewing pretty much all day and am starting to feel a little tired xx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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No worries Shenel it's always great to hear from you. Thanks so much :) Jaq xx
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:-) xx
