Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

I like all of your work Jaq Cee You are one of my favorite writers of all Wish I had a 6 to give for this but since i do not here is a special award to show that it deserves a 6 or more

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013

Awwww thank you so much TK. It's beautiful and much appreciated. :) Jaq xxx

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

Your on fire....this is exceptional...I haven't even gotten past the first stanza...just a sec... okay...well that last stanza....landed me back in reality rather quickly....very clever change up from toy....to you'll beg for death...and I still wont give it to you....lmbo- alright rock on writer love you Michael

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013

Hahahahaha, just creating bounderies that suit me for a wee change. ;-) I'm sure I wouldn't need to use the last stanza on you Michael lmao :) Jaq, loveya xxx

Comment from October21

Excellent

Good! In a relationship we must always respect ourselves- then we can respect and love the other person. And if every person thought this way ... Wow... It would all be a hell of a lot easier! You have described the perfect sort of love and relationship here.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Thank you so much Shenel as always you hit the mark. :) Jaq xx

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

first line is missing a comma after make me. but other than that girl, you have penned a corker and can certainly hold your head up high. love it, best Indie xxx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Thanks for your very kind review and pointers girlie :) much love

Jaq xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 21-Mar-2013

anytime Honey xx

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Sorted that first line :D xxx

reply by Indie Skreet on 21-Mar-2013

:)

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

Well said Jaq, you have to stand up for yourself cause no one else is capable of doing that for you. You must first love and respect yourself and then those qualities will be found in a mutually supportive relationship. One small spelling edit:
decieve - deceive - 'i' before 'e' except after 'c'
Well done, StayStrong, Garth xox

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Aww damn meant to change that :). Thanks Garth much appreciated mate Peace n Love Jaq xxx

reply by GarthL on 21-Mar-2013

Cheers!!!

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes m y friend there is nothing wrong with deserving respect I liked this poem it builds well to the strong ending well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Thanks once again Jill for a lovely review my friend :) Jill xx

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jaq, that's telling em:D Well penned as well as strong. It allows the reader to get caught up in the romance of the moment fully knowing you are the protector of yourself and will walk if needed.
Thanks for sharing it. Well penned.
Maureen

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Thanks so much Maureen, it's been a long time coming :) Jaq xxx