My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "We had it all?"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from reconciled
I'll bet he thinks about those nights too ....-smile- Fear....kills most things Jaq............when its all broken down to its base ingredient......its fear. When we fall to it....it follows..forever. Wonderful stuff love you Michael
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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I'll bet he thinks about those nights too ....-smile- Fear....kills most things Jaq............when its all broken down to its base ingredient......its fear. When we fall to it....it follows..forever. Wonderful stuff love you Michael
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2013
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Yes it does Michael and it's a sad fact of life. 'Though it's one that I am changing :) love ya Jaq xx
Comment from Galactia
It's very sad and a difficult situation to face when a relationship/marriage dosn't end well after so long being together. Hope 2013 brings you love and happiness.
Regards
tia
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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It's very sad and a difficult situation to face when a relationship/marriage dosn't end well after so long being together. Hope 2013 brings you love and happiness.
Regards
tia
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Tia. What will be will be I guess :) Jaq xx
Comment from GarthL
Well done Jaq, very sensual but I'm left wondering was it love really or just pure lust?? I really like Adele's song and whilst there are only a few female sung songs I have in my repertoire this is definitely one of them, I love it! I usually pair it with Gotye's Somebody That I Used to Know in my song list - they work great together. Cyndi Lauper's True Colors is another I enjoy doing also. StaySafe, Garth
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Well done Jaq, very sensual but I'm left wondering was it love really or just pure lust?? I really like Adele's song and whilst there are only a few female sung songs I have in my repertoire this is definitely one of them, I love it! I usually pair it with Gotye's Somebody That I Used to Know in my song list - they work great together. Cyndi Lauper's True Colors is another I enjoy doing also. StaySafe, Garth
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
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Apparently it was lust for him and what she thought was love Garth. Yea I love that song too. Haven't heard of Gotye but will look them up. Thanks for a great review. Peace n Love Jaq xx
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Gotye's was a world wide smash hit that won every award going last year, I think you'll like it. StaySafe, Garth
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Will check it out after work tonight Garth. Peace n Love Jaq xx
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The original is great but I actually prefer a version by a Canadian group of extreme multi-instrumentalists called Walk Off The Earth, or WOTE.
They're on YouTube and the song is called Somebody That I Used To Know and it's a real treat, five people playing one guitar!?!?
They also do a version of Adele's Somebody Like You that will blow you away!! Take Care, Garth xox
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Sounds worth a look mate :) Jaq xx
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I don't think you'll regret it, extremely talented Canadians with a certain irreverence that's captivating!!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written my friend it is hard when a couple break up and you miss the feeling of togetherness well done on this write regards Jill
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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This is very well written my friend it is hard when a couple break up and you miss the feeling of togetherness well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thanks once again Jill. It's all a learning curve you have re-evaluate all around you. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
beautifully written Jaq. What else can I say that I haven't already said? Another one which speaks my word I am afraid, at the risk of sounding unoriginal. well down girl, best Indie xx
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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beautifully written Jaq. What else can I say that I haven't already said? Another one which speaks my word I am afraid, at the risk of sounding unoriginal. well down girl, best Indie xx
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thanks Indie, always a pleasure to hear from you. hugs, Jaq xx
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hugs back sweetheart :) xx
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
SOMETIMES IT LAST IN LOVE
SOMETIMES IT HURTS INSTEAD
READ YOU LINES THREE TIMES SO MOVING SO TRUE PLAYED ADEL 3 TIMES AFTER READING THIS BOO HOO'S OVER FLOWED IN MY EYES
NUFF SAID ********** READ MY BITTERSWEET PROSE AS SHE MENTIONS BITTERSWEET IN THIS SONG I POSTED YESTERDAY THIS WAS JUST GRRRREAT AGAIN
TK
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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SOMETIMES IT LAST IN LOVE
SOMETIMES IT HURTS INSTEAD
READ YOU LINES THREE TIMES SO MOVING SO TRUE PLAYED ADEL 3 TIMES AFTER READING THIS BOO HOO'S OVER FLOWED IN MY EYES
NUFF SAID ********** READ MY BITTERSWEET PROSE AS SHE MENTIONS BITTERSWEET IN THIS SONG I POSTED YESTERDAY THIS WAS JUST GRRRREAT AGAIN
TK
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Ahhh TK thank you and I have read Bittersweet it was so good. :) Jaq x
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smiling Knight I am right now even some tarnish seems to have dissipated lol
Comment from Rondeno
You are developing your own poetic voice. This is definitely "yours". It has eroticism, but it's more emotional than carnal. And it ends in a lovely wistfulness.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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You are developing your own poetic voice. This is definitely "yours". It has eroticism, but it's more emotional than carnal. And it ends in a lovely wistfulness.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review Meehal. My muse has been inspiring me of late . I'm glad you like it that makes it worthwhile :) Jacqueline xx
Comment from lorijean
Very sensual, and well written, I can feel your loss of the unexpected, do you ever wonder, where are they now and do they think of you as you write your heart out.......
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Very sensual, and well written, I can feel your loss of the unexpected, do you ever wonder, where are they now and do they think of you as you write your heart out.......
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Every day lorijean :) but life goes on as they say. Thanks for your review Jaq xxx
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Actually Jaq I'm in it right now and it's awful on my mind all day everyday - hang on in there........
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Aww you take care xxx
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jaq, This is a really great expression of love lost, or was it love at all. You did a great job on it. I felt the words deeply, pondered my own lost love's in life.
Thanks for sharing it - a powerful work to read.
Maureen
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Hi Jaq, This is a really great expression of love lost, or was it love at all. You did a great job on it. I felt the words deeply, pondered my own lost love's in life.
Thanks for sharing it - a powerful work to read.
Maureen
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Maureen :) glad you enjoyed it. Jaq xx
Comment from Gungalo
Slight sexual reference? LOL girl you have been away much too long. LOL it's not slight but full bore forward and then some. Wonderful in its intent though. I thought it to be awesome.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Slight sexual reference? LOL girl you have been away much too long. LOL it's not slight but full bore forward and then some. Wonderful in its intent though. I thought it to be awesome.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Oh dear I better change the warning....lol. Thanks Gungalo you are a star girlie xxx
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LOL
