Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is very well written my friend and romantic my friend you have done really well I enjoyed this poem that is as always well presented well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Thank you so much for your very kind review Jill. :) Jaq xx

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

Sounds like things are working out beautifully for you Jaq!
Well done, nicely descriptive, good imagery both visual and audio-phonic with your drums of war. Great image and video complete a very good presentation! LiveLove'n'Laugh, Garth

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Thanks Garth, just trying out a new route in poetry here. I do mostly dark, but it's time to lighten up. Peace and love Jaq xx

reply by GarthL on 20-Mar-2013

Spring is in the air for you guys now so drink in the sunshine and smile Jaq xox

Comment from RJ

Excellent

This is a nice refreshing poem. I could visualize new beginning love here. Your poem read well with a good flow and rhythm. I saw nothing to change. RJ

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thanks so much RJ xx

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Wow this was great I pride my self in writing pretty good romantic some what sensual poems and prose but dang I must move over welcome to my house won't you come on in ..well written well played Jaq Cee

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thanks Knight, it is lovely to have your opinion on this. I will get to know your work too. This is the new me ;-). Once more thanks again :) Jaq xx

reply by A TARNISHED KNIGHT on 19-Mar-2013

GOOD BE LOOKING FOR U 2
TK

Comment from October21

Excellent

Aw! You captured the moment so well that it felt as though I was there watching them. This was simply beautiful Jaq, I loved it:-) and the kiss was so passionate and wonderful:-) sometimes we'll leave everything behind just to have one person:-)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Too true Shenel sometimes you just have to take a chance. Thanks very much your reviews are always appreciated :) Jaq xx

reply by October21 on 19-Mar-2013

You're welcome Jaq and agreed- life is for taking chances:-) xx

Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

you do a good sexy write girl - whoever he is must keep coming back for more lol..................................yes, this is a great little teaser just before bedtime :) Very well done, warmly Indie xx

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thanks Indie you're a wee star. I appreciate your words. I will def have to go back to mean and moody though, I enjoy it so much more, lol. :) Jaq xxx

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your well-written love poem vividly conveys the mindset of two caught up in the throes of heady passion and a sense of victory and freedom.

"Lay" should be "lie."

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you Janice your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq xx

Comment from Rondeno

Excellent

This poem really works! It's both sexy and romantic at the same time, and its slight, elegant verse form is perfect for the gentle message of love which it conveys.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Meehal. Your opinion matters to me. :) Jacqueline xxx