Like Crazy
a short poem about the love between two people8 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
There's nothing more precious than a baby. I had two sons 16 months apart. My daughter can along when my youngest son was 12. She was his baby. The father side of him was birthed. Even when he was 16 and started dating. he would bathe her and take her on his dates. When he went into the Navy when he was 17 she was devastated. This is a lovely tribute to your younger sister. i did so enjoy it. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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There's nothing more precious than a baby. I had two sons 16 months apart. My daughter can along when my youngest son was 12. She was his baby. The father side of him was birthed. Even when he was 16 and started dating. he would bathe her and take her on his dates. When he went into the Navy when he was 17 she was devastated. This is a lovely tribute to your younger sister. i did so enjoy it. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Your son is going to make an amazing father! I pray that i find a man like that someday! thank you for sharing that with me and for your encouraging words!
Comment from Elena77
Very good job at getting your message across. You chose a great picture! Although it can describe any shared love, it seems like it does work best by giving infants this voice, because if they could talk, I'm sure this is exactly the message they'd want us to hear! Great job!
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Very good job at getting your message across. You chose a great picture! Although it can describe any shared love, it seems like it does work best by giving infants this voice, because if they could talk, I'm sure this is exactly the message they'd want us to hear! Great job!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from steevie
Your poem is so simple and yet so powerful in nature!! I can almost hear the voice of the small infant asking for what she wants, and of course, what she wants is love and lots of it.
This piece is written with skill and knowledge of the human experience.
Well done, Kenzi and its so great so see you post again after a long dry spell
hugs
smiles
steve
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Your poem is so simple and yet so powerful in nature!! I can almost hear the voice of the small infant asking for what she wants, and of course, what she wants is love and lots of it.
This piece is written with skill and knowledge of the human experience.
Well done, Kenzi and its so great so see you post again after a long dry spell
hugs
smiles
steve
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you so much! it has been quite a while since i last posted on here! haha
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you're welcome, Kenzi
steve
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya,
this is a great little numeber
hold me in your arms
forever and for always
love me like crazy
wouldnt it be nice if you hade someone who loved you this much xx
this is a good contest entry good luck
whiuspers xx
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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hiya,
this is a great little numeber
hold me in your arms
forever and for always
love me like crazy
wouldnt it be nice if you hade someone who loved you this much xx
this is a good contest entry good luck
whiuspers xx
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Love is longed like anything, the only soul for living, the need is so passionate, nothing else in demand so is the heart desire, poet tells this for about his sister in mind, a good Haiku voiced and coloured in love.
06-226-44477-Reviews Written-Thursday 14 March 2013-Ex FS Top Rank # 1 Reviewer
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Love is longed like anything, the only soul for living, the need is so passionate, nothing else in demand so is the heart desire, poet tells this for about his sister in mind, a good Haiku voiced and coloured in love.
06-226-44477-Reviews Written-Thursday 14 March 2013-Ex FS Top Rank # 1 Reviewer
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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thank you so very much
Comment from Indie Skreet
this is okay, but to be honest, no great shakes and I have seen many entries that are. i feel you need to go much deeper to pull a love poem in this genre off, best of luck though - i have been proved wrong before, just not very often, Indie
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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this is okay, but to be honest, no great shakes and I have seen many entries that are. i feel you need to go much deeper to pull a love poem in this genre off, best of luck though - i have been proved wrong before, just not very often, Indie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you for your honesty!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made good use of every syllable to express the sweetness of outward, physically-shown, enduring love.
Good job
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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You have made good use of every syllable to express the sweetness of outward, physically-shown, enduring love.
Good job
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you
Comment from neharika.m
HI, the verse is terse and telling. The thought beautiful and touching. Competition is sure getting tough. Thanks for sharing. All the best.
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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HI, the verse is terse and telling. The thought beautiful and touching. Competition is sure getting tough. Thanks for sharing. All the best.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-May-2013
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Thank you very much!
