Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Yes, yes, retreat and fight another day. Good picture and presentation. Clever write with an easy message.
In a 1-6-1 are you saying six words or beats in line two? Very enjoyable,
Robin :)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013

Six beats. . Thanks Robin.

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

DON'T YOU JUST HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS DEFEAT AND IN RETREAT NICE PIC TO GO ALONG WITH THIS SHORT BUT POWERFUL PIECE MR T
TK

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thank you Sir T. They needed a valiant Knight to lead them.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Defeat
The lead Platoon's been soundly Beat
Retreat

Well it rhymes well and gives directions!! LOL must have bee the right decision to make. After all, when the big guns fall ...

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013

Thanks Gungalo. You wrote a review four times the words in my poem. LOL.