Comment from Indie Skreet

Excellent

another skillful, deep, sad piece of beauty, so rightly 'recognised'. I feel certain, I have much in common with you as to regards, 'feelings' , therefore even more of a pleasure to read your words, Indie

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Thanks Indie yea I get that feeling too xx

reply by Indie Skreet on 16-Mar-2013

I am scurrying through your work as we speak :)

reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013

Lol I will look forward to your poems too girlie xxx

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Passion...
excellent written poem so creatively and elegently crafted. I really enjoyed this poem. My favourite being your opening stanza...

flows hot from my
core

Iridescent and rare--
like golden
ore

It reminds me of a game my husband use to play, Dune and Eve.

great job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

Cheers Tia, it's nice to have your thoughts on it. :) Jaq xxx

Comment from Spike the second

Excellent

What a super poem Jaq, my friend.
Sorry but old Spikey has had a horrid work workload, that shows no sign of going down. So I am only getting a short time to review now and then and no time at the moment to write.

Superb writing my friend.

Worth a 6 but apparently I have awarded you 2 in 30 days!!!!

Blessings

Spike

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013

Thank you so much Spike, as always a pleasure. Blessings, Jaq xx

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

Very nicely penned Jaq. A vivid and honest description of giving yourself and not being treated in a respectful loving manner. I've no doubt your time will come, stay true to yourself and strive on. Well done, Garth

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2013

Thank you so much Garth your words are much appreciated xx peace n love Jaq

Comment from RJ

Excellent

A nicely written poem that flows with good imagery of passion. Nothing to change.

Passion...
flows hot from my
core
forevermore

Thanks for sharing. RJ

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thanks so much for your very kind review :) Jaq xx

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

strong imagery and form, flows well and paints a dark picture of passion. This poem spoke to me of one-night-stands, where one thought it meant more. I think there are many ways this could be interpreted.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thanks emsey it's certainly not an easy thing to write about. Great to hear your thoughts. :) Jaq xx

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

You have expressed your thoughts and feelings so well in this poem my friend this reads well and enhanced beautifully I apologies for being late reviewing regards Jill

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

No problems Jill, as always your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq xx

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A nice one with a great general layout to complement this poem. Nice alliteration and a nice simile. The title is very catching and attracted me to your poem.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

Thank you Robina much appreciated indeed :) jaq x

reply by robina1978 on 08-Mar-2013

Welcome Jack, I enjoyed this poem. Ine

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Jaq Cee,

For passion displayed so vividly so bare, it brings on my feelings of lust in return.

I would change the font color since the color you chose make this difficult to read.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

Thank you Winslow, I'll check that out now :) Jaq xx

Comment from words

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem on passion misspent.
I especially liked your ending:


where my passion
abused--

laid bare
on the
floor...


forevermore


Great presentation.

Hugs, d

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

Thank you so much words. I appreciate your review. :) Jaq xx