Little Poems
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Comment from Robin Gilmor
Lovely thought that will surely provoke more. Well written with a great picture and color presentation. Joy to read you ABC verse. Thank you for
sharing it with us. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Lovely thought that will surely provoke more. Well written with a great picture and color presentation. Joy to read you ABC verse. Thank you for
sharing it with us. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thanks Robin. Now, if I could only do what I say.
Comment from sunnilicious
Perfect poem to commemorate the changing of Popes. Yesterday morning, I was amazed at the power of religious belief. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Perfect poem to commemorate the changing of Popes. Yesterday morning, I was amazed at the power of religious belief. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2013
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Thank you sunnilicious. I was amazed watching that transition.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Perfect, Treischel! The ABC, is perfect and the words could not be bettered. This is the first time I've seen a 'q' in an ABC, but it fits in really well. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
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Perfect, Treischel! The ABC, is perfect and the words could not be bettered. This is the first time I've seen a 'q' in an ABC, but it fits in really well. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 01-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2013
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Thank you Sandra. I didn't think it was very good, but my wife begged me to put it in.
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She was right to do so. :)
Comment from jojo1127
Nice ABC poem. Short and to the point on how to gain true spiritual growth. Many people should follow this advice regardless of the type of religion practiced.
Unlike some ABC poems you managed to follow the alphabet all the way through PQRST usually the last line can be any letter, but this poem was good anyway.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Nice ABC poem. Short and to the point on how to gain true spiritual growth. Many people should follow this advice regardless of the type of religion practiced.
Unlike some ABC poems you managed to follow the alphabet all the way through PQRST usually the last line can be any letter, but this poem was good anyway.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you jojo
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I apologize for the late response. I did want to let you know I received your message.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Very nice and inspiring. I never heard of an ABC poem until I got on this site about 3 weeks ago. Maybe someday I will try it. Great poem with much truth. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Very nice and inspiring. I never heard of an ABC poem until I got on this site about 3 weeks ago. Maybe someday I will try it. Great poem with much truth. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thank you Evelyn. Yes, try one.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent ABC Poem format
strong verb choices for your imperative statements
good proximate rhyme of fraud/God
Then WILL the Gates of Heaven WILL be opened - drop one WILL
A most thoughtful message
good alliteration in speak soft
Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Your poem is in excellent ABC Poem format
strong verb choices for your imperative statements
good proximate rhyme of fraud/God
Then WILL the Gates of Heaven WILL be opened - drop one WILL
A most thoughtful message
good alliteration in speak soft
Brooke
Comment Written 28-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013
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Thanks Brooke. Dang I thought I had taken that second "will" out.
