Comment from October21

Exceptional

You seen our pain- you saw our pain/you'd seen our pan

Excellent work on the goodness of Jesus' deed. VERY clever that it looks like a cross on the page- loved that idea and you pulled it off flawlessly! Great work Jaq, I enjoyed. The short sentences emphasised the importance of what you were saying, making them bold statements:-) excellent entry!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

Thanks Shenel for your wonderful review and rating. I will sort that spag out also. :) Jaq xx

reply by October21 on 28-Feb-2013

Loved your piece so much:-) you're welcome Jaq:-)

Comment from Spike the second

Excellent

Hi Jaq

An ever so brief visit to FS for me, as the poor old bugger has more work to get out before they start whinging where their work is.

A lovely poem my friend and I am glad I got to read it. I am just peeved that I cannot award a six yet.

Blessings

Spike

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2013

No problems Spike yu have to work to keep the wolf from the door my friend. Thank you, much appreciated as always :) Jaq xx

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

That says it all Jaq and I love the shape you have created with your text, very creative shape poetry that embodies the lyrics visually. Well done, stay safe, Garth

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013

Thanks Garth, was just attempting something new :) It looks more like 'The Old Rugged Cross' lol. Peace n Love, Jaq xx

reply by GarthL on 27-Feb-2013

I thought it was really very good and I like the rugged old cross, good shape poetry to embody the lyrics! Well done, LiveLove'n'Peace, Garth

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2013

Thanks one again Garth, nice to hear from you. :) Jaq. Blessings to you and yours xx

reply by GarthL on 27-Feb-2013

Cheers mate!!!

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend such a meaningful poem expressing so much about our lord Jesus Christ who died to save us all well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013

Thank you Jill much appreciated xx

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

This is an excellent written faith poem reflecting your Lord Jesus, love the creativity making this a cros shaped .beautiful presentation,

well done and GL

regards
tia

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013

Thanks so much Tia :) x

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

oF COURSE THE ASRTWORK MOVED ME AND YOUR MESSAGE DID THE SAME.
tHIS IS WHAT i CALL A FOOD FOR THOUGHT POEM...MEANING AFTER YOU READ IT YOU GO hMMMM.
tHANK YOU FOR SHARING.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013

Thanks for a lovely review :) JAq x

reply by misscookie on 26-Feb-2013

Your very welcome.

reply by misscookie on 26-Feb-2013

My pleasure.

Comment from seren james

Excellent

An enjoyable free style poem. Lovely rhyme and rhythm although freestyle. I like the shape of the cross. It will really be nice as a bookmark for Easter.
Lovely inspirational picture. Good contest entry.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013

Many thanks Seren, enjoyed your review. :) Jaq x