Comment from Imn2writingstories

Excellent

you know for the style of poem this is you did very well I think and it makes sense. Some styles of poems are very uniquely done sort of crazy to me but hey you did well.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2013

Thank you lm2. Not crazy about that format don't think I'll do another.

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

So that's where all these strange challenging forms are coming from. Very interesting piece that you have successfully mastered. I am impressed. Thank you for sharing your clever work. Robin :)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013

Thanks Robin. Just trying my hand at the different forms.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Goodness, I bet that was hard to do! Well done you! I have never heard of the īteacup dictionary poem before, I donīt think I will be trying it for a while! Well done! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2013

Thanks Sandra. I don't think I'll be doing another, but it was an interesting exercise.

Comment from Curt Mongold

Excellent

Well, for the form you picked, I would say you did a really good job! To pick an eight syllable word to start must have made this even more challenging to accomplish, and the author is to be commended for the piece, that both rhymes and makes sense.
Curt

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Thank you Curt. You are very perceptive. Thought I'd try it. Don't think I'll do another.

Comment from Siouxsun

Excellent

Very challenging style poem, I think you did quite well with it. Its hard enough getting it to descend in syllable let alone making it rhyme too!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Thank you souk sun.