My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "Lonely Life"All of my poems of release.
9 total reviews
Comment from Indie Skreet
well, you have pretty much written my words for me, hence sitting here enjoying my laptops company a bit more than probably healthy lol xx
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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well, you have pretty much written my words for me, hence sitting here enjoying my laptops company a bit more than probably healthy lol xx
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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You and me both ;-) xx
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I'd say lol, but maybe sob is more appropriate :)
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hahaha hey things can only get better ;-) xx
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mm, seems so ;)
Comment from Madlibs
Very good poem...I liked the listing of the lonely words. Mournful sobs and melancholy cries are similar, yet very different. Mournful sobs embody sorrow while the melancholy cries bring to mind desperate pleas for forgiveness or attention. Nicely done
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Very good poem...I liked the listing of the lonely words. Mournful sobs and melancholy cries are similar, yet very different. Mournful sobs embody sorrow while the melancholy cries bring to mind desperate pleas for forgiveness or attention. Nicely done
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thanks so much Madlibs :)
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. Your state of loneliness is indeed well described to the point of tearful reminders of what its like to be alone. The reclusive word is good because it reminds me of "Choice to be alone therefore, inspires hope. Good job with "Company an absent friend." Good luck and cheers.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Hello. Your state of loneliness is indeed well described to the point of tearful reminders of what its like to be alone. The reclusive word is good because it reminds me of "Choice to be alone therefore, inspires hope. Good job with "Company an absent friend." Good luck and cheers.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2013
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Thanks as always Benjamin, much appreciated.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the loneliness that permeates the soul, great picture. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the loneliness that permeates the soul, great picture. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks SWJ much appreciated as always.
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. Loneliness can seem to last forever. THe days are long, the nights even longer. We can freeze in place because the loneliness won't go away. Great work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Loneliness can seem to last forever. THe days are long, the nights even longer. We can freeze in place because the loneliness won't go away. Great work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks elliejean much appreciated.
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Thanks elliejean much appreciated.
Comment from DustN727
This was a very good poem. I really liked how you laid out the different ways of being alone, and then personified "company." Great job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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This was a very good poem. I really liked how you laid out the different ways of being alone, and then personified "company." Great job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from J.R Dickinson
It seems to me you understand loneliness well,adaccuratey wrote about it. There seems to be a dark and [barely] scary mood set in this theme and oddy reminds me of ghosts, which I don't quite understand myself. But this is good.
Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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It seems to me you understand loneliness well,adaccuratey wrote about it. There seems to be a dark and [barely] scary mood set in this theme and oddy reminds me of ghosts, which I don't quite understand myself. But this is good.
Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing JR.
Comment from Adri7enne
Pretty sad and desperate. It's a shame that we don't learn to cope with our own company. Sooner or later, we come to realize even aloneness doesn't necessarily mean loneliness. But that wouldn't fit the description of "loneliness" anymore, would it?
Well done, with a dark, moody aura to it all. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Pretty sad and desperate. It's a shame that we don't learn to cope with our own company. Sooner or later, we come to realize even aloneness doesn't necessarily mean loneliness. But that wouldn't fit the description of "loneliness" anymore, would it?
Well done, with a dark, moody aura to it all. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Some older people do get desperate when lonely. Unfortunately not all can see the difference. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Crystal Carey
Its not so much the words that makes your work special, but the flow that you created with them. I love three colors and feel over all you got the feelings you were trying to convert across.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Its not so much the words that makes your work special, but the flow that you created with them. I love three colors and feel over all you got the feelings you were trying to convert across.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks so much Crystal :)
