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Viewing comments for Chapter 105 "Searching."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from October21
This is so beautiful! I love your ending!
It's like they say, you shouldn't go searching for happiness; it is like a butterfly. If you patiently wait, it will come and sit on your shoulder. I love endings that spark rays of hope. Also I like the creativity- the rainbow part and the simile about the wind, combined with strong personification to bring it to life with the word 'embrace'. Excellent job, loved the rhetorical question in the first stanza!:)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2012
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This is so beautiful! I love your ending!
It's like they say, you shouldn't go searching for happiness; it is like a butterfly. If you patiently wait, it will come and sit on your shoulder. I love endings that spark rays of hope. Also I like the creativity- the rainbow part and the simile about the wind, combined with strong personification to bring it to life with the word 'embrace'. Excellent job, loved the rhetorical question in the first stanza!:)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much Shenel, your reviews are much appreciated and thorough. :) Jaq x
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration in love that lasts
Effective use of question to draw the reader in
Compelling simile in trying to catch the wind and jumping over a rainbow to explain how difficult it is to find a lasting love
I love the Christmas reference
good alliteration in stop searching
This is a hope bound to resonate with many readers :-) B rooke
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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good alliteration in love that lasts
Effective use of question to draw the reader in
Compelling simile in trying to catch the wind and jumping over a rainbow to explain how difficult it is to find a lasting love
I love the Christmas reference
good alliteration in stop searching
This is a hope bound to resonate with many readers :-) B rooke
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. :) Jaq x
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, Jaq.
I know the feeling as I've waited for years for Miss Perect to knock on my door. Hmm...maybe I should get out more. :-)
As you imply, it's often best not to force things and hope it comes out the blue (as your colour scheme).
Wishing you every happines and love, Ray
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Hi, Jaq.
I know the feeling as I've waited for years for Miss Perect to knock on my door. Hmm...maybe I should get out more. :-)
As you imply, it's often best not to force things and hope it comes out the blue (as your colour scheme).
Wishing you every happines and love, Ray
Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thanks for your great review Ray. To wait is the only thing to do ....lol xx
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Thanks for your great review Ray. To wait is the only thing to do ....lol xx
Comment from Gungalo
You never know JC when love is going to come along so be ready for it always,
To pluck a star
from the darkest of night
and place atop
your Christmas tree,
might be an easier dream
to achieve.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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You never know JC when love is going to come along so be ready for it always,
To pluck a star
from the darkest of night
and place atop
your Christmas tree,
might be an easier dream
to achieve.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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I know Gungalo, it's out there somewhere ;-) xx
Thanks for your lovely review :) Jaq xx
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Smile JC.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Well Jaq you and me both, but I suppose we must continue to hope and to believe it does exist....somewhere.
Well penned my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Holidays
Maureen
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Well Jaq you and me both, but I suppose we must continue to hope and to believe it does exist....somewhere.
Well penned my friend.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy Holidays
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
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Thank you Maureen, hope is what keeps us going, thanks for your great review. Have a great Christmastime :) Jaq x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written some people do give up on hope too easily you can accomplish so much if you just have a little hope and faith well done again my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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This is very well written some people do give up on hope too easily you can accomplish so much if you just have a little hope and faith well done again my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much Jill. Much appreciated :) Jaq xx
Comment from wiljacro
HI! Jaq Cee. They (whoever "They" are) say that, if you become so engrossed in looking far afield for your hearts desire, then you will, almost certainly, miss what is sitting right under your nose! Just a thought! wiljacro.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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HI! Jaq Cee. They (whoever "They" are) say that, if you become so engrossed in looking far afield for your hearts desire, then you will, almost certainly, miss what is sitting right under your nose! Just a thought! wiljacro.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thanks wiljacro that is probably true. :) Thanks for reading my words. :) Jaq x
Comment from Jamezy
That was so well written Jaq Cee.. Again I'm pretty certain that this was written on a lunch break , or whilst waiting for the kettle to boil.. You have a gift with words , the ease in which you construct a verse is so very impressive. I have came across people who can do this but never with the ease in which you pull it off.. A very talented lady indeed. I've said that before & I'm sure I shall say it again. It's always a pleasure to read your work whenever you post... x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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That was so well written Jaq Cee.. Again I'm pretty certain that this was written on a lunch break , or whilst waiting for the kettle to boil.. You have a gift with words , the ease in which you construct a verse is so very impressive. I have came across people who can do this but never with the ease in which you pull it off.. A very talented lady indeed. I've said that before & I'm sure I shall say it again. It's always a pleasure to read your work whenever you post... x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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It was indeed in a qjiet minute at work this afternoon. Thanks so much Jamezy xx
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It was indeed in a qjiet minute at work this afternoon. Thanks so much Jamezy xx
Comment from anarchist12
Jaq Cee... wonderful writing .. thank you for becoming a fan as well as i really don't promote .. well written and expressed your imagery is so vert cute . thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Jaq Cee... wonderful writing .. thank you for becoming a fan as well as i really don't promote .. well written and expressed your imagery is so vert cute . thanks for sharing
Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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A good friend sent me by your way. Thanks for reviewing and your kind words :) Jaq xx
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Well how kind :)
Comment from Saucey
Wow what a cute pic, I love this piece "Maybe if I stop searching for love everlasting, it will float gently by just when I least expect it." That's a mouth full and that's usually how it happens. I love love. Thanks for sharing this gem.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Wow what a cute pic, I love this piece "Maybe if I stop searching for love everlasting, it will float gently by just when I least expect it." That's a mouth full and that's usually how it happens. I love love. Thanks for sharing this gem.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review. :) Jaq x
