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Viewing comments for Chapter 108 "Life's Journey."
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend I have definitely had a lot happen in my life I could have thrown in the towel years ago and given up but I didn't the biggest mistake I made was my marriage, but I have moved on now and I am happy rebuilding my life with happier memories well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Jill, I am much the same. Onwards and upwards my friend :) Jaq xx
Comment from October21
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Hiya Jaq, I enjoyed this wonderful self explanatory piece of poetry as the insight into real life is very deep and you speak the truth with every word. Life is a journey and sometimes it will take us places we never thought we'd go. Great work!:)

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Thanks Shenel always appreciate your words girlie. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Jamezy
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Spoken from the heart as always.. Your words we have discussed many times I'm sure. Knowing these words and believing them is half of life's battles made easier my friend.. Know where you want to go and make it happen. Take very good care of yourself My Friend with the French sounding name. Always looking out for your work... x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Jamezy, your review is appreciated as always. :) Jaq x
Comment from Gungalo
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So cherish the good times
and suffer the trials
we're only human
we will make
mistakes.

Yes we will JC and we will make them time and again before learning anything from them. Oh some will learn straight away but others it will take time.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Cheers Gungalo your words mean so much. Believe me I made some mistakes more than once. :) Jaq x
reply by Gungalo on 15-Dec-2012
    Smile JC.
Comment from Spike the second
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Great poem Jaq

I always compare my life and ailments to those that my wife cares for. These are people with brain damage, either through illness or injury. I think blimey my problems pale into insignificance compared to these people. For sure we should cherish good times and what we have as there always those far worse of than us.

Super poem and so well written my friend.

Blessings

Spike

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Ah Spike, for sure there are people less blessed than ourselves. It doesn't take away from the fact that we have these trials, but it may put them into perspective. Thanks so much for your kind review as always. :) Jaq x
reply by Spike the second on 15-Dec-2012
    Yes Jaq

    When I see those people I think how lucky I am. The trials are what we need otherwise we'd all be Alan Sugar or Richard Branson. The trials I find are what makes us normal.

    Blessings

    Spike
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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A strong poem filled with a deeper wisdom. We are all students continued in our learning of life. Well penned and insightful to read.
Happy Holidays.
Maureen

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Maureen. Our learning curve never ends, thank goodness. Your review is much appreciated. Hope this finds you feeling well and have a Happy Holiday too. :) Jaq x
Comment from arshi naaz
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This is written very beautifully. It reminds me of the decisions i made in my life good and bad.The last part is very encouraging.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Thanks arshi for your kind words. We all need to have that wee bit of optimism. :) Jaq x
Comment from ronnie k
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WHAT a good look at life. WHAT a well written poem, I will have you know I was your in house cheering team". " Lets live Jag CEE," "were only human we will make mistakes"

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Thanks so much Ronnie for your kind words. Yes we should all live as if it's our last. :) Jaq x
Comment from rjuselius
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the trials and tribulations we experience every sinlge day are but paths to be chosen. choose wisely is the message conveyed.
thank you for sharing!
happy holidays!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    Happy Holidays Rebekka and thank you so much for your kind words. :) Jaq x
Comment from Earl of Oxford
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Good philosophy and advice, Jaq.

Too many indididuals consider having a temporary zit on the end of their nose is a heartbreaking disaster, whereas others with deep emotional or health issues carry on bravely.

We're all different of course and not everyone can react the same way to varying degrees of the above, or hunger/poverty.

Nicely said.

Have a great weekend, Ray

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2012
    You too Ray, hope you are all settled in and having lot's of time with wee Harry. You're right about how some people can handle more than others. We are all different indeed and thank God for that. :) jaq x