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My Life in words

Viewing comments for Chapter 110 "The Creation."
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from Galactia
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this
day's dawn
will arise
soon we shall see
the wondrous sight that is God's Creation

Perfect syllable count, great presentation and you did a wonderful job reflecting God

GL

Regards
tia

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much Tia. Much appreciated as always.
Comment from HittorX
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Very cool, love anything giving our creator glory! Nice work, looks to me like you got the rules down pat. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much once again for your lovely review HittorX.
Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture I love the poem. I love watching sunrise. The promise of a new day gives us a new beginning. Great work.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
    Ye me too elliejean thanks for a lovely review.
Comment from TOMORAL
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The words and the picture are stunning to me to. God's creation for all to see just by looking with our soul and not our cluttered mind. Beautifully done. I would frame this and put it on my wall.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your wonderful and complimentory review.
Comment from Tithonus50
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Great use of colour and a fantastic image, another impressive and interesting form of poetry with fantastic imagery of grandeur.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review.