My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 118 "Light of Hope."All of my poems of release.
6 total reviews
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. Very neat poem here. Its inspirational in the sense of the lighthouse doing what it was intended to do and it comes through. Homeward bound. Nice. Good luck and cheers.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Hello. Very neat poem here. Its inspirational in the sense of the lighthouse doing what it was intended to do and it comes through. Homeward bound. Nice. Good luck and cheers.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2012
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Thank you Benjamin it was my first attempt at a Septolet. :)
Comment from Galactia
Stormy seas
frightens fishermen
Lonely lighthouse
beacon bright
Guiding light
helping sailors
homeward bound
unusual and creative septolet poem, love the imagery you project through your poem and the added pic, wonderful
GL in the contest
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Stormy seas
frightens fishermen
Lonely lighthouse
beacon bright
Guiding light
helping sailors
homeward bound
unusual and creative septolet poem, love the imagery you project through your poem and the added pic, wonderful
GL in the contest
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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My first attempt Tia, wasn't too sure what was expected of me. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from prayingpoet
Nice Septolet, with your 14 words. Great artwork. Hard to use up my two lines to say what a nice poem and I am happy you understood the instructions!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Nice Septolet, with your 14 words. Great artwork. Hard to use up my two lines to say what a nice poem and I am happy you understood the instructions!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words Janice.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Ooh, this gave me warm fuzzies. I love lighthouses, we have a fair number of them here along the Great Lakes. So, your poem was especially appreciated. Good luck with this very worthy entry!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Ooh, this gave me warm fuzzies. I love lighthouses, we have a fair number of them here along the Great Lakes. So, your poem was especially appreciated. Good luck with this very worthy entry!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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WFD thank you so much, I'm glad it resonated with you.
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Sure did and you are most welcome, Jaq Cee.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi, the visual says it all and your words confirm the hopeful outcome. I live in a fishing community so this rings so true to me. Thank you for sharing this poem with me and good luck in the contest. Kindest wishes James xx
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Hi, the visual says it all and your words confirm the hopeful outcome. I live in a fishing community so this rings so true to me. Thank you for sharing this poem with me and good luck in the contest. Kindest wishes James xx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much James, glad it rang true to you. Much appreciated.
Comment from Capricorn30
I like the alliterative lines of the first stanza--good concept, your poem complements the picture perfectly;
Lighthouses have always fascinated me, the idea of a stone structure aiding those out at sea has always interested me, your contest entry makes for a great read
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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I like the alliterative lines of the first stanza--good concept, your poem complements the picture perfectly;
Lighthouses have always fascinated me, the idea of a stone structure aiding those out at sea has always interested me, your contest entry makes for a great read
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you very much Capricorn30 for your lovely review.
