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Viewing comments for Chapter 120 "haiku(snow falls gently down)"
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Comment from sunnilicious
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That is a good haiku. It is well thought out and too the point. Also, it met the syllable count requirements. Excellent work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your lovely review sunni.
Comment from gazzagodbod
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so missed the haiku contests i love snow and i love your little poem too well written and a lovely picture too well done and good luck xxgazzaxx

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
    Thanks gazza, so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. Good job with your Haiku. I liked how you didn't repeat the word snow from your first line to the third line using instead, "Soft." Good picture too, Good luck in the contest. Cheers.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
    Thank you again Benjamin for your review.
Comment from mtnspirit
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Hi,

With all contest requirements met you have painted a lovely image with your words. Good job and best wishes with this contest.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
    Thank you mtnspirit, much appreciated.
Comment from Galactia
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snow falls gently down
my face is tilted upwards
encounters soft flakes

great job perfect 5'7'5 Haiku format.

Good luck in the contest

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
    Thanks Tia, as always you are so kind.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is an appealing winter image and fits well with something that you love: snowflakes on your face. The form and syllable count are correct according to the rules of this contest. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Thanks for your lovely review Jeanie.
Comment from terry drake
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Don't catch cold but just enjoy the experience. i liked your haiku and the challenge seems to have been met successfully. You did well, congratulations.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2012

reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
    Thanks so much Terry much appreciated.