Incarceration
Senryu Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem and the message is interesting. Your poem flows well and your artwork choice for your poem is great.
Angel123
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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I enjoyed reading your poem and the message is interesting. Your poem flows well and your artwork choice for your poem is great.
Angel123
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thanks Angel123. I appreciate your kind review!
Comment from Galactia
incarceration -5
arrested development7
inevitable 5
great litle 5'7'5 senryu. well i gues if your walking on the pathof injustice thats whats oing to happen.
Great Job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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incarceration -5
arrested development7
inevitable 5
great litle 5'7'5 senryu. well i gues if your walking on the pathof injustice thats whats oing to happen.
Great Job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you much for your generous review!
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. This is a cool little picture you attached. I didn't quite fancy the inevitable part of incarceration as in meaning we're all going to eventually end up in the slammer. I'd like to think I'm not doing anything illegal enough to warrant getting arrested. Good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Hello. This is a cool little picture you attached. I didn't quite fancy the inevitable part of incarceration as in meaning we're all going to eventually end up in the slammer. I'd like to think I'm not doing anything illegal enough to warrant getting arrested. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from lakeport
Incarceration indeed the way things going no a days they have to build more prisons,A dramatic 5/7/5/poem,Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Incarceration indeed the way things going no a days they have to build more prisons,A dramatic 5/7/5/poem,Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Lakeport.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thank you for this gracious review, Lakeport!
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your welcome,
could you please review my last poem.Thank you.Lakeport.
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your welcome.
could you please review my last poem.Thank you.Lakeport.
Comment from alexisleech
Well done managing to make this clever little Senryu even more weighty by using a spot on image to accompany it. Yes, one would like to think incarceration was an inevitable development after your arrested - as long as you're guilty, of course!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Well done managing to make this clever little Senryu even more weighty by using a spot on image to accompany it. Yes, one would like to think incarceration was an inevitable development after your arrested - as long as you're guilty, of course!
Alexis x
Comment Written 02-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thank you for your gracious review, Alexis!
Comment from Bayberry
You've developed this 5-7-5 entry very well and the irony is right on target.
I really enjoyed the encounter and appreciated the humor.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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You've developed this 5-7-5 entry very well and the irony is right on target.
I really enjoyed the encounter and appreciated the humor.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
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Thank you much, SE, for your encouraging review. I appreciate the good wishes!