All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Dancing With Your Shadow"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from cinamonsunrise
Thank you for making me happy so early in the day. As usual, your style is playful, fun and vivid. It flowed nicely and the presentation is very pleasing visually. Congratulations on your win. Well-deserved! cinamon sunrise :-)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you for making me happy so early in the day. As usual, your style is playful, fun and vivid. It flowed nicely and the presentation is very pleasing visually. Congratulations on your win. Well-deserved! cinamon sunrise :-)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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My pleasure - thx so much cinamon!
Comment from Honeysuckle1876
Great poem. It made me smile and remember those happy days with my children and when the first discovered their shadow. Such wonderful memories. Well deserving of the contest winner.
Congradulations!!!!
Angie
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Great poem. It made me smile and remember those happy days with my children and when the first discovered their shadow. Such wonderful memories. Well deserving of the contest winner.
Congradulations!!!!
Angie
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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thx so much Angie! :)Sharyn
Comment from lappmellott
I enjoyed reading this piece. It took me back to times long, long ago. When I was a little girl I loved our trips to the ocean. The picture is wonderful. Good job and congratulations.
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I enjoyed reading this piece. It took me back to times long, long ago. When I was a little girl I loved our trips to the ocean. The picture is wonderful. Good job and congratulations.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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thx so much! :) Sharyn
Comment from angel123
Your nature poem of sun and fun is beautiful. It flows well and your artwork choice was the right one for your poem.
Angel123
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Your nature poem of sun and fun is beautiful. It flows well and your artwork choice was the right one for your poem.
Angel123
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thx so much angel, as always!! :) Sharyn
Comment from God's Writer
This is much more like you are. Congratulations on your contest win. Full of wonderful alliteration and metaphors. Thank you for writing this awesome poem.
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This is much more like you are. Congratulations on your contest win. Full of wonderful alliteration and metaphors. Thank you for writing this awesome poem.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Bless you, Erick ... I'm so glad you caught this one - it captures a very dear memory for me. (We won't say how MANY years ago!) And bless you doubly for your lovely 'six' - goes so nicely with morning coffee.
Hugs, as always,
Sharyn :)
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You are very welcome. xoxo me
Comment from jadapenn
This poem talked of such freedom and abandon. I wonder if the sea has this euphoric effect on one. The visuals were great as the child with the curly hair danced on the beach.
Lovely picture rounded your work off well. Well done. luv jada
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This poem talked of such freedom and abandon. I wonder if the sea has this euphoric effect on one. The visuals were great as the child with the curly hair danced on the beach.
Lovely picture rounded your work off well. Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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thx so much, jada! :) Sharyn
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi visionary1234,
Easy to see why this one is a contest winner. Art is awesome and you have expressed such joy at seeing a child dancing with shadows. I can tell this comes from the heart written beautifully in this free verse. Congrats and thank you so much for sharing.
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Hi visionary1234,
Easy to see why this one is a contest winner. Art is awesome and you have expressed such joy at seeing a child dancing with shadows. I can tell this comes from the heart written beautifully in this free verse. Congrats and thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Bless you mtnspirit! :) Sharyn
Comment from ruby.sahay
"God's golden shells", "bubbling blue tide", "high cry of gulls"- some superb imagery pertaining to the central idea in the poem..
Great alliteration too:'sleepy soft sand,
sighing in the sun', 'bubbling blue'.
Onomatopoeic words:
"singing
in
the
spiral
of
the
leaves"
Overall, a great poetic effect
Cheers
Ruby
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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"God's golden shells", "bubbling blue tide", "high cry of gulls"- some superb imagery pertaining to the central idea in the poem..
Great alliteration too:'sleepy soft sand,
sighing in the sun', 'bubbling blue'.
Onomatopoeic words:
"singing
in
the
spiral
of
the
leaves"
Overall, a great poetic effect
Cheers
Ruby
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much, Ruby, for coming to my beach! And, of course, for reading my poem, AND giving me a wonderful, and greatly appreciated, '6'!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from fairy77
Congrats on your win.This is indeed surperb.Loved wriggle free.My shadow is disappearing.Thank God.Everything about this was light and happy.What a breath of fresh air.Well penned genius.beth fairy77.
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Congrats on your win.This is indeed surperb.Loved wriggle free.My shadow is disappearing.Thank God.Everything about this was light and happy.What a breath of fresh air.Well penned genius.beth fairy77.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Bless you, Beth! :) Sharyn
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
visionary1234:
What a happy poem. No wonder it is the winner of
the Happy Poem Contest. I used to have an English
Shepherd who would chase his shadow - too bad my
family could not afford a movie camera back then.
This poem just made me smile all over.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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visionary1234:
What a happy poem. No wonder it is the winner of
the Happy Poem Contest. I used to have an English
Shepherd who would chase his shadow - too bad my
family could not afford a movie camera back then.
This poem just made me smile all over.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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so "happy" you enjoyed this one, too, Jan ... I've always been lucky enough to live near the ocean, so beaches have been part of our lives - this was a special day - which I'll always remember :) Sharyn