Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

The woman in the picture is all that. I guess I didn't get a message about this one. I was thinking I hadn't Read you for a while so I had to check. This is clever. Good luck with the prompt Jimmy..Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012

It was a blind entry..Thanks for the read and comment. It was provoking to many; in a good way. Jimmy

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Great piece, Jax. The format is excellent but the words completely open a once forgotten world. i think they still watch and wish ;)

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012

Thanks so much glad you enjoyed it. It has evoked the same response from many. Delightful memories they are a a joy. Thanks Jax

Comment from Cornetist

Excellent

Your poem evokes an image even sexier than the one in your accompaning artwork...so, you can imagine the pictures I'M getting!!!
Excellent handling and forming of the words into the required syllabic measures. Your pen doubles nicely as an artist's brush!
Cornetist

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012

Thanks so much.. It is great to get such a great review from such a through reviewer. Thanks Jax

Comment from Gregory K Shipman

Excellent

Great six line poem... Absolutely great. Perfect description of the eye-catching lady. Perfect imaging of her burning the minds (especially since she's red-hot) of the leering old men (leering gives us the right mental picture) and of course the 'wishing for way back when'... a great example of old men with young thoughts and time travel wishes...

well done

greg

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks my friend. I am glad the verse touched you. You really got it. You are the second person that thought leering was the best verb, that observation will drive improvement in my work. So I thank you both for that. I guess we all end up dreaming about the past. Thanks Jax

Comment from Cedar

Excellent

I really like your entry. It has flare, a great presentation and your words are so true. I can verify that, because I'm one of those old men. Good luck. Bill

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks for the comments Jax

Comment from amada

Excellent

Very good use of the numbered amount of syllables. You use strong and descriptive words that entice the imagination of the reader. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for for your comments Jax

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

The poem is perfect for the photo, or is the photo perfect for the poem?
Either way, it's a great entry for the contest,
Best of luck with that,
John

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks so much Jax

Comment from tinlight

Excellent

Old age is so merciless! Maybe the old men should stop their ogling, but one can hardly blame them for wishing for a return to way back when admiring glances would not be disparaged as leers.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Amen sister.time marches on. But believe me the admiring thing is BS, Freud was right on it's all about the sex. Its the old guys can only dream. Thanks for the read and comment. Jax

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Good alliteration of "Sexy" "Slinky" to begin a well-written contest entry;
Many women can also relate to their younger days as they view the photograph!
Thank you for reminding us of youthful days we will always remember.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Its fun to remember. Darn only memories. Thanks for the read and comment. Jax

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Love these 6 line poems - people are so ingenious with the prompt! Amazing what pictures you can paint in so few syllables - this is a goodie! :) Sharyn

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks so much glad you liked it Jax