My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 127 "Anguish"All of my poems of release.
13 total reviews
Comment from Rondeno
Hi, Jacqueline!
If I say it's "good", I mean as a poem ... the feelings it expresses are almost too dark to take. Well done, for creating such a deep, emotional piece. (That's not you in the art work, is it? hehehe)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Hi, Jacqueline!
If I say it's "good", I mean as a poem ... the feelings it expresses are almost too dark to take. Well done, for creating such a deep, emotional piece. (That's not you in the art work, is it? hehehe)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Lol not quite me Michael :) Thanks for your great review Jaq xx
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Lol not quite me Michael :) Thanks for your great review Jaq xx
Comment from Ekim777
It's a sad poem well bolstered by the picture. It's a cry most of us feel. "Where is the life we have lost in living?" So said T.S. Eliot. We generally cry not for what we have genuinely failed to do but for a lost opportunity. Our lives are rife with them. We weep for a life not fully lived.Mainly we are frightened to do, what we most want to do.We need to listen carefully to the wisdom of our souls.
Ekim777
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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It's a sad poem well bolstered by the picture. It's a cry most of us feel. "Where is the life we have lost in living?" So said T.S. Eliot. We generally cry not for what we have genuinely failed to do but for a lost opportunity. Our lives are rife with them. We weep for a life not fully lived.Mainly we are frightened to do, what we most want to do.We need to listen carefully to the wisdom of our souls.
Ekim777
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review. :) Jaq x
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
Yeah, I understand that lost phrase. Some questions I guess will always remain unanswered. We take wrong forks in the road but in the end we still lived life to the fullest, the fullest that we were capable of living it. Always keep hope in your heart and laughter in your spirit, better times are just around the bend. Loved your expression and your presentation, well done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Yeah, I understand that lost phrase. Some questions I guess will always remain unanswered. We take wrong forks in the road but in the end we still lived life to the fullest, the fullest that we were capable of living it. Always keep hope in your heart and laughter in your spirit, better times are just around the bend. Loved your expression and your presentation, well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Dawn, hope is forever present. :) Jaq x
Comment from rjuselius
"Sitting here I cry
For a life not fully lived
Wondering what went wrong
Anguish pours from my soul"
i've been in that situation and still am for my schizophrenia. but i won't have it, i can't dwell in the past. hope before anguish.
thank you for sharing!
goodluck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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"Sitting here I cry
For a life not fully lived
Wondering what went wrong
Anguish pours from my soul"
i've been in that situation and still am for my schizophrenia. but i won't have it, i can't dwell in the past. hope before anguish.
thank you for sharing!
goodluck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Thanks Rebekka, you're are right not to lie down to it. Hope is the saving grace. :) Jaq x
Comment from Tina McKala
really excellent poem, capturing dark cold feelings so perfectly. So raw and so true,
a life not fully lived // I believe that everyone can relate to it (more or less often)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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really excellent poem, capturing dark cold feelings so perfectly. So raw and so true,
a life not fully lived // I believe that everyone can relate to it (more or less often)
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Yes Tina I think a lot of people feel this way at some time. Thanks for reviewing. :) Jaq x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, heart-wrenching poem vividly conveys the mindset of one overwhelmed by regrets over lost opportunities. Very good
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Your well-written, heart-wrenching poem vividly conveys the mindset of one overwhelmed by regrets over lost opportunities. Very good
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Janice for your kind review. At least we always have tomorrow and hope. :) Jaq x
Comment from adewpearl
excellent alliteration in wondering what went wrong
excellent consonance of L sounds in life not fully lived
soulful expression of emotion :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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excellent alliteration in wondering what went wrong
excellent consonance of L sounds in life not fully lived
soulful expression of emotion :-) Brooke
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Brooke once again. Your review means a lot.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Wow..Very dark and thought provoking poem you have here. It's brilliant. I love the "anguish" part. I would be interested to know what makes one believe thier life has not fully been lived. Regardless, the attached picture is aces. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Wow..Very dark and thought provoking poem you have here. It's brilliant. I love the "anguish" part. I would be interested to know what makes one believe thier life has not fully been lived. Regardless, the attached picture is aces. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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Benjamin once again a lovely review, much appreciated.
Comment from Treischel
Exquisitely written, powerfully presented example of the Naani style poem. Wow! What impressive artwork. Wow! The verse cries out loudly in despair. That awesome alliteration accentuates the artistic ambiance beyond expectations. Magnificent!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Exquisitely written, powerfully presented example of the Naani style poem. Wow! What impressive artwork. Wow! The verse cries out loudly in despair. That awesome alliteration accentuates the artistic ambiance beyond expectations. Magnificent!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Treischel, your review is very much appreciated.
Comment from mauial
This naani has very deep emotional appeal as I think many of us go through what your poem conveys at one time or another in our life.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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This naani has very deep emotional appeal as I think many of us go through what your poem conveys at one time or another in our life.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your review mauial. Always good to know others feel the same.
