Comment from elliejean

Excellent

I love the picture. It adds to the 'noise' of the poem. The loud sounds keep repeating. Then they add horror. Your body shuts down to it. Great work.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012

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Comment from Galactia

Excellent

This is a great Cacophony Poem .

faqvourite stanza is...

Outside claps of thunder rolling
lane after lane of angels bowling
next door I hear a bloody shriek
a shot gun blast I jump I freak

great job and good luck in the contest

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2012

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Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Sounds like a sleepless night in the old neighborhood. A Neil Diamond put it "Its a Beautiful Noise, comin off of the street" . With all those booms, and shrieks and bangs, the picture perfectly expresses it all!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2012

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Comment from 4tulips

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your great poem. It is hard to put out of our heads the noises that are constantly annoying. It is no wonder you were able to relate to the picture, in fact most of us can. Your words certainly did allow me to imagine the noise in your poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2012

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