My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 133 "Apostles."All of my poems of release.
6 total reviews
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. I loved the subject matter. We still have a few of these great people. THey share their love and ideas. Great work.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I loved the subject matter. We still have a few of these great people. THey share their love and ideas. Great work.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review x
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Thank you so much for your great review x
Comment from Galactia
beautiful written acrostic poem about Gods loyal servents and their devoted love to him.
well done and good luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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beautiful written acrostic poem about Gods loyal servents and their devoted love to him.
well done and good luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Tia.
Comment from PUPA
I like this Acrostic because it runs smoothly down the page, has an enjoyable rhythm. It even rhymes which is a plus to an Acrostic.
This is a meaningful poem, thanks for sharing.
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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I like this Acrostic because it runs smoothly down the page, has an enjoyable rhythm. It even rhymes which is a plus to an Acrostic.
This is a meaningful poem, thanks for sharing.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much PUPA, much appreciated.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
An acrostic poem - not the
easiest of styles - this
works well -
good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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An acrostic poem - not the
easiest of styles - this
works well -
good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Margaret.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Very nice poem. The image really reinforces the message. Your message however is equally powerful and very true.
Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Very nice poem. The image really reinforces the message. Your message however is equally powerful and very true.
Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Benjamin.
Comment from 9999pool
Just one glitch: ehaltations..you mean exaltations? This is a poem to praise the APOSTLES and perhaps you can nail in the message and giving praise to the Apostles for God's good work e.g.
"Soon, through the apostles we join God's nation"
Now in this final line, the word apostles is mentioned and no longer hidden and the acrostic meaning is spelled out clearly. What you think? Good poem and said it very clearly. Cheers.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Just one glitch: ehaltations..you mean exaltations? This is a poem to praise the APOSTLES and perhaps you can nail in the message and giving praise to the Apostles for God's good work e.g.
"Soon, through the apostles we join God's nation"
Now in this final line, the word apostles is mentioned and no longer hidden and the acrostic meaning is spelled out clearly. What you think? Good poem and said it very clearly. Cheers.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your help that is indeed a good option. Thanks for your great review.
