My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 139 "Bullies"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from expressions9
Your poem carries an excellent message, encouraging children not to let bullies win. Children need to be reminded of this. (Slight corection - "bully's" should be changed to "bullies" in the title and the poem).
Very well written poem and perfect photo.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Your poem carries an excellent message, encouraging children not to let bullies win. Children need to be reminded of this. (Slight corection - "bully's" should be changed to "bullies" in the title and the poem).
Very well written poem and perfect photo.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your helpful and kind review.
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You're welcome. (Oops, yet I spelt "correction" wrongly in my review!)
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:)
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a good poem. I think it meets the criteria very well. You chose a lovely little image to go with it too. Bullying is such a sad thing. Best wishes with this. CG
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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This is a good poem. I think it meets the criteria very well. You chose a lovely little image to go with it too. Bullying is such a sad thing. Best wishes with this. CG
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your kind words and review.
Comment from Terror2s
Are you a teacher or counselor? This sounds like one of those poems they would read to the kids. It flowed well and provided an impactful message. T2
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Are you a teacher or counselor? This sounds like one of those poems they would read to the kids. It flowed well and provided an impactful message. T2
Comment Written 13-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thank you T2, I am neither, just a parent who had to deal with this.
Comment from prayingpoet
Great message for children to hear. Being a bully is not nice, but children need to learn to stand up to bullies. Nicely written. Thanks for a great message.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Great message for children to hear. Being a bully is not nice, but children need to learn to stand up to bullies. Nicely written. Thanks for a great message.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2012
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Thank you Janice for your great words.
Comment from Treischel
Excellent! Very well done! The artwork is perfectly matched to the important message all the kids need to know about bullies. Nicely rhymes. Nicely paced. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Excellent! Very well done! The artwork is perfectly matched to the important message all the kids need to know about bullies. Nicely rhymes. Nicely paced. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Treischel your review is appreciated.
Comment from buttonsfandango
This poem is so poignant because its so true. I wish more kids and adults spoke up more. There's no one out there who's truly alone.
Very to the point. I liked it. It makes you think an it flows rather well.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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This poem is so poignant because its so true. I wish more kids and adults spoke up more. There's no one out there who's truly alone.
Very to the point. I liked it. It makes you think an it flows rather well.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you, I also think it's an important message.
Comment from Papabearua
A very timely message presented in a reader friendly format. In today's electronic world cyber bullying has become a major problem and must be addressed the same as physical bullying is.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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A very timely message presented in a reader friendly format. In today's electronic world cyber bullying has become a major problem and must be addressed the same as physical bullying is.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much for you very kind appraisal.
