My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 140 "5-7-5 (singing in the rain)"All of my poems of release.
14 total reviews
Comment from jaydub99
I liked your prompt. Structurally sound and interesting with the artwork. In fact that cartoon adds to the humor quite a bit. Your poem was light and amusing. I wish you luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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I liked your prompt. Structurally sound and interesting with the artwork. In fact that cartoon adds to the humor quite a bit. Your poem was light and amusing. I wish you luck on the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind appraisal.
Comment from mystery poet
Sounds like me when I try to sing.
I surely can identify.
Your google art and words a perfect fits.
True form for the contest and best wishes to you...
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Sounds like me when I try to sing.
I surely can identify.
Your google art and words a perfect fits.
True form for the contest and best wishes to you...
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much mystery poet, much appreciated.
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You are welcome!
Comment from visionary1234
or shower is fine too ... make room for my hubbie because he's absolutely TONE DEAF in the music department! fun write and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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or shower is fine too ... make room for my hubbie because he's absolutely TONE DEAF in the music department! fun write and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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visionary all are welcome into my tone deaf bubble :) Thanks for you good luck wishes.
Comment from PoesyPoet
These are just hilarious. It's gonna be hard trying to pick just one winner. Well done and good luck. Sounds like thee winner to me. PP
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These are just hilarious. It's gonna be hard trying to pick just one winner. Well done and good luck. Sounds like thee winner to me. PP
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much Poesy for your very kind words.
Comment from wiljacro
HI! You have a great sense of humour and obviously don't take yourself too seriously! You chose a gret pic. to get your 5-7-5 across. Good luck in this Comp. wiljacro.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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HI! You have a great sense of humour and obviously don't take yourself too seriously! You chose a gret pic. to get your 5-7-5 across. Good luck in this Comp. wiljacro.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thank you ever so much for this very kind review. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
Nice use of the form and the setup. I have often been asked if I've ever been told I sing well. When I say 'No' it is typically followed by, "Take the hint."
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Nice use of the form and the setup. I have often been asked if I've ever been told I sing well. When I say 'No' it is typically followed by, "Take the hint."
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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HAHA yes I know that feeling. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Simple Reflection
I think we should join a 'singing in the rain' club. That's where most people would want me! Love the art! It is absolutely perfect for this poem. You have all the criteria for a 5-7-5 poem and this is filled with humor. Good luck in the contest!
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I think we should join a 'singing in the rain' club. That's where most people would want me! Love the art! It is absolutely perfect for this poem. You have all the criteria for a 5-7-5 poem and this is filled with humor. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thanks once again for your very kind review and rating. Much appreciated.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is funny, with a clever play on "Singing in the Rain." (Folks that sing off key in church are said to be "making a joyful noise.") Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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This is funny, with a clever play on "Singing in the Rain." (Folks that sing off key in church are said to be "making a joyful noise.") Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 12-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much for your very kind review Jeanie.
Comment from megg_2020
Five stars for this poem because it's funny and self-deprecating at the same time. It also tells a story within three short lines. Very well done,good luck in the contest. Blessed Be.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
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Five stars for this poem because it's funny and self-deprecating at the same time. It also tells a story within three short lines. Very well done,good luck in the contest. Blessed Be.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012
Thank you megg, very much appreciated.
Comment from MAMONIA
Great stuff you have here. It is like singing
so low no one can hear you. This really got a
chuckle out of me.
I think this is an excellent entry for the
contest and wish you the best of luck.
Marie
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Great stuff you have here. It is like singing
so low no one can hear you. This really got a
chuckle out of me.
I think this is an excellent entry for the
contest and wish you the best of luck.
Marie
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
