Comment from Jamezy

Excellent

Hi my friend with the French sounding name. Not been on for a while so just viewing some of your latest creations. WOW... Go Jaq go. Really liked this. Your able to capture an audience in so few words.. Think your an amazing lady.. feel proud.. Keep up the amazing work... in all you do , not just the writing.... x

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2012

Thank you so much for your kind words and ongoing support Jamezy :) Jaq x

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

nice alliteration in melting moments
I like that you show the effects of passion rather than just tell us you are feeling desire
excellent consonance of L sounds in afterglow of loving entanglement
You create a beautiful and emotion-filled visual :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012

Thanks so much Brooke, much appreciated as always. :) Jaq x

Comment from Spike the second

Excellent

Blimey you girls and your sensual poetry Jaq

you get an old git like me well and truly worked up. Sweat trickling down smooth curves. Now now matron I know I must take the bromide LOL:-)

Great poem Jaq

Spike

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

LOL Spike I am really just trying out different styles and subject matter. Glad you liked it, always appreciated. Carry on doctor...

:) Jaq x

reply by Spike the second on 07-Nov-2012

Noooo schtop it :)

Spike

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Wow very sensual and romantic my friend and that's all I am going to say lol this is very well written and presented I enjoyed regards Jill

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Thanks Jill, just trying to spread my wings. :) Jaq x

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

afterglow of
loving
entanglement

Oh JC it's beautiful girl. The afterglow of loving is a wonderful thing. If you were to remove the word "forever" in the last verse, it would even be believable. Sigh.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Will do and thanks for your helpful review Gungalo. :) Jaq xx

reply by Gungalo on 07-Nov-2012

Smile.

Comment from Earl of Oxford

Excellent

Hi, Jaq

ttpo, 'forvever' in last line.

This certainly describes how we can feel after love-making, and thanks for the memory, LOL.

Passionate, sensual and sweet.

Best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

Cheers for pointing out that ttpo Ray ;-). I didn't notice it and the spell check didn't pick it up for some reason. Thanks for your review my friend. :) Jaq x