Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Tis a log ways off Jaq but described to a Tee. Aazaing writing and beautiful descriptive poetry. It will be here soon enough girl. SIgh ............

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012

The contest is on for another 127 days or something so I thought it best to be topical. Thanks for your continued support my friend. :) Jaq x

reply by Gungalo on 07-Nov-2012

Oh boy.

Comment from Spike the second

Excellent

Hmm Yes Jaq I do like this.

I also like the fact you are taking us ahead to spring and that warmth creeping back.

I think you stand a great chance in the contest with this.

By the way how did you do in the challenge?


Blessings

Spike

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012

I won :). Thanks for all your support Spike :) Jaq x

reply by Spike the second on 06-Nov-2012

Well done

There, I said you would. They are not all prude in the poetry world.

Blessings

Spike

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes I liked this my friend great imagery and descriptions using 22 syllables and it is beautifully presented I enjoyed good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012

Thank you so very much my friend xx Jaq

Comment from Isaac Kavik

Excellent

I love the alliteration of "spring has sprung ". It seems so natural and flows so freely, no. Thanks for posting I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012

Thanks you very much Isaac, much appreciated. :) Jaq x