My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 149 "Friends and Angels."All of my poems of release.
16 total reviews
Comment from Angels27
Very beautiful picture and what heart warming lines. On a difficult journey...angels are there to help you... Very true...just knowing there is a helping hand out there....helps us face life.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Very beautiful picture and what heart warming lines. On a difficult journey...angels are there to help you... Very true...just knowing there is a helping hand out there....helps us face life.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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They are indeed beside us every step of the way. Thanks for your kind review. :) Jaq x
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
A wonderful poem on the angels among us. The artwork is perfect for the theme of this work. Background and font color choices match the art well. The rhyming scheme makes for a good flow. A very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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A wonderful poem on the angels among us. The artwork is perfect for the theme of this work. Background and font color choices match the art well. The rhyming scheme makes for a good flow. A very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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So glad you enjoyed it Midnight :) Jaq x
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:) MN
Comment from l.raven
Very nicely written. I think we all have our days. But we still have our faith. And one day we will all meet our angels. I believe that. Very well written. I love the wording.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Very nicely written. I think we all have our days. But we still have our faith. And one day we will all meet our angels. I believe that. Very well written. I love the wording.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your lovely review. :) Jaq x
Comment from nancyjam
This is a beautiful poem about friendship
and how important it is to have close friends
when we need them - they do play the part
of angels sent to us in times of need.
You r poem reads smoothly and has excellent rhyme.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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This is a beautiful poem about friendship
and how important it is to have close friends
when we need them - they do play the part
of angels sent to us in times of need.
You r poem reads smoothly and has excellent rhyme.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you nancyjam for your very kind review :) Jaq x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written my friend in life at times we need a guardian angel it is a and you have expressed the feeling of not being alone strongly regards Jill
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Yes this is very well written my friend in life at times we need a guardian angel it is a and you have expressed the feeling of not being alone strongly regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you Jill, hope you are resting and saving some energy for your writing. I also hope your mother is better. :) Jaq x
Comment from Gungalo
If your faith does lessen,
you feel your hope has gone.
A feather falls to earth,
to show you're not alone.
Sigh, these quatrains are beautiful in their delivery of your message. For sure, we are never alone.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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If your faith does lessen,
you feel your hope has gone.
A feather falls to earth,
to show you're not alone.
Sigh, these quatrains are beautiful in their delivery of your message. For sure, we are never alone.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Gungalo, your reviews are always appreciated. :) Jaq x
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Smile.
Comment from reconciled
Wow man....like in Forrest Gump.....loved that part....at the beginning and the end, Brilliant my friend love Michael
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Wow man....like in Forrest Gump.....loved that part....at the beginning and the end, Brilliant my friend love Michael
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much for your lovely words Michael. :) Jaq x
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my pleasure I got the day off... -smile-
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, Jaq.
Rather than 'are like angels', maybe a more poetic 'resemble angels' - this also aids the flow better.
Inspired description of the feather being from a helpful angel. Vivid and imaginative.
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Hi, Jaq.
Rather than 'are like angels', maybe a more poetic 'resemble angels' - this also aids the flow better.
Inspired description of the feather being from a helpful angel. Vivid and imaginative.
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your helpful review Ray. Much appreciated. Have implemented changes. :) Jaq x
Comment from October21
There is a beautiful message in this poem- we should hold on to those who never fail to stand by our side when we need them.
I love the comparison you make with friends and angels. Indeed, the people who help you through your tough times and comfort you in your despair seem to come from heaven in your eyes. We all need somebody to be there for us in life, so we know we are never alone.
Thank you for sharing
October
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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There is a beautiful message in this poem- we should hold on to those who never fail to stand by our side when we need them.
I love the comparison you make with friends and angels. Indeed, the people who help you through your tough times and comfort you in your despair seem to come from heaven in your eyes. We all need somebody to be there for us in life, so we know we are never alone.
Thank you for sharing
October
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your very kind and insightful review my friend. :) Jaq x
Comment from Spike the second
Hi Jaq
A wonderful poem. It's a great subject and you often wonder are there guardian angels! I do believe that there is someone that watches over you and they help when needed. It may be a grandparent or nowdays my father. But at times I feel presence and have really been spooked when alone, that someone is watching. My grandmother was creative and I seem to have inherited this as I went to art school. But the inspiration seems to jump into me all the time, especially in my work as a housing designer. You are right true friends do also guide us like angels.
Lovely writing Jaq, let's hope some clown doesn't criticize this.
Kind Regards
Spike
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Hi Jaq
A wonderful poem. It's a great subject and you often wonder are there guardian angels! I do believe that there is someone that watches over you and they help when needed. It may be a grandparent or nowdays my father. But at times I feel presence and have really been spooked when alone, that someone is watching. My grandmother was creative and I seem to have inherited this as I went to art school. But the inspiration seems to jump into me all the time, especially in my work as a housing designer. You are right true friends do also guide us like angels.
Lovely writing Jaq, let's hope some clown doesn't criticize this.
Kind Regards
Spike
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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LOL Spike you make me smile. Constructive criticism is fine, welcomed even, the other kind says more about the critic ;-). Thanks for your continued encouragement. :) Jaq x
