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Who's Mitt Romney?

senryu

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Comment from juliedickson55
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Mr. Moneybags Rich Man is who he is...

Political candidates all lie, give false promise and cannot see the middle class needs.

I am sick of all of it, and can't wait until it's all over next wk.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2012
    I hear you my friend, likewise, I can't wait either; I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from ajdevore
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Good insight. I like your correlation of the masked candidate to a guest at a halloween party. And the picture is so perfect. Good job!!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Hello ajdevore, my friend, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hey. Good job. You made the correct rhythm. I like your visual. I have to disagree with the word "Perfect.' How about the words "half a" since it would go good with the picture. Just a thought, but hey, better than what I could come up with. Good luck.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from missy98writer
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Poet,
Yout satirical Senryu is very well written with strong imagery painting in an economy of words.
In your Senryu you've used excellent alliteration with the P words.
Your satori line is great.
Clever play on Halloween and unmasked.       
perfect candidate 
to party this Halloween- 
Mitt Romney unmasked
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your Senryu to other reviewers.
The art work you used is a laugh riot.
Missy. 

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Missy my friend, always a pleasure to read your wonderful and encouraging reviews, I thank you very much.
Comment from l.raven
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I don't think we really know who any of these politicians are. They all lie and you don't know what you are going to get. They are for themselves. Way to sad. A great write!!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Linda my friend, I agree with you; I thank you for your time and the insights; take care.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this political senryu about the mask candidates hide behind, i wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    swj my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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You are getting quite good at these kinds of poems. This is particularly good as I know people, who would be upset that the race is getting closer. Great work on this one. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    xoxo my friend, I appreciate the time and the encouraging review, thank you very much.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I think we have seen the real Mitt Romney and if "he" doesn't stand up I wouldn't blame him. LOL. Great job with this and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Hello Wiva, my friend, glad you stopped by and that you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from hari anand
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Great job. What a haiku, Halloween political rare combination, interesting concept,picture is so perfect, best of luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Hello Mbabills, my friend, I appreciate your time and am glad that you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from zlp22
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Great poem and picture. That man tells different things to different people. H won't say what will really happen if he becomes President. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 01-Nov-2012
    Hello friend, glad you like the write, thank you very much.