My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 156 "Summer Breeze"All of my poems of release.
13 total reviews
Comment from Jamezy
I really like this as i do much of your work. To me the magic is in its simplicity. The words flow really well. It sometimes seems like you can write a verse while your waiting for the kettle to boil. Very well done Jaq Cee..
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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I really like this as i do much of your work. To me the magic is in its simplicity. The words flow really well. It sometimes seems like you can write a verse while your waiting for the kettle to boil. Very well done Jaq Cee..
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much my lovely friend. You are way too kind to me but it is appreciated. :) Jaq x
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Another message of hope and health
Jaq. A hiccup in the meter here and
there but that doesn't deter from
the body of work and the very pleasing
feeling this exudes. The picture
was cleverly chosen and works well. Eric
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Another message of hope and health
Jaq. A hiccup in the meter here and
there but that doesn't deter from
the body of work and the very pleasing
feeling this exudes. The picture
was cleverly chosen and works well. Eric
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Thank you Eric for your kind review. I am not quite there with my metering but I will keep trying. :) Jaq x
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my pleasure jaq, I ain't much good myself!
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Don't ever say that, we are all good in our own way. I will have a wee look at your writing soon. :) Jaq x
Comment from yonashalom
This is such a peaceful poem. It shares hope in dreams coming true. Isn't that what we all want? I like this and the photo compliments it well. May the desires of your heart be His and may they come true. Take care, my friend. ~Yona
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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This is such a peaceful poem. It shares hope in dreams coming true. Isn't that what we all want? I like this and the photo compliments it well. May the desires of your heart be His and may they come true. Take care, my friend. ~Yona
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your very kind review :) Jaq x
Comment from l.raven
This is a beautiful poem. If only we could just close our eyes and when we open them things are just the way we want them to be. The life of our dreams, very well written. And i love the picture. Perfect!!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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This is a beautiful poem. If only we could just close our eyes and when we open them things are just the way we want them to be. The life of our dreams, very well written. And i love the picture. Perfect!!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Wouldn't it indeed Raven. Thanks for your kind review :) Jaq x
Comment from October21
Wow! Jaq, what a beautiful and fulfilling poem this is! If we all wanted to fulfill our dreams and accomplish our life ambitions- and we worked really hard at it- I think we could all make a difference and achieve something. We just need that sense of a fresh start, of the reassurance that the past is behind us and we have another chance to make the future right.
A lovely and positive poem, incorporating a beautiful description of nature to complete it.
Hope all is well,
I can see your posts definitely are:)
-October
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Wow! Jaq, what a beautiful and fulfilling poem this is! If we all wanted to fulfill our dreams and accomplish our life ambitions- and we worked really hard at it- I think we could all make a difference and achieve something. We just need that sense of a fresh start, of the reassurance that the past is behind us and we have another chance to make the future right.
A lovely and positive poem, incorporating a beautiful description of nature to complete it.
Hope all is well,
I can see your posts definitely are:)
-October
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much my wee friend. Your review is both kind and very insightful. :) Jaq xx Thanks you so much for the fantastic rating. xx
Comment from Gungalo
Blow soft summer breeze through my mind,
waft calming, silk soft wind.
Release my dreams into today,
let my new life begin.
It's funny how we always want a new life and find ways to get it. Awesome quatrains here JC.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Blow soft summer breeze through my mind,
waft calming, silk soft wind.
Release my dreams into today,
let my new life begin.
It's funny how we always want a new life and find ways to get it. Awesome quatrains here JC.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Gungalo. There is always a way to find what we want. You're review is much appreciated as ever :) Jaq xx
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Thank you so much Gungalo. There is always a way to find what we want. You're review is much appreciated as ever :) Jaq xx
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Smile.
Comment from Spike the second
Lovely poem Jaq
Blimey after the summer we had I think we long for that warm summer breeze, in more ways than one and we all would love our dreams to come true.
The reality however is colder, wetter weather and damp squibs of dreams.
A really super poem and I hope your dreams come true.
Kind Regards
Spike
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Lovely poem Jaq
Blimey after the summer we had I think we long for that warm summer breeze, in more ways than one and we all would love our dreams to come true.
The reality however is colder, wetter weather and damp squibs of dreams.
A really super poem and I hope your dreams come true.
Kind Regards
Spike
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Just a wee wistful moment there Spike. The reality is so different. Still we can but hope :) Thanks for your review :) Jaq x
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, Jaq
This has a great summery fresh feel about it, with your positivity at the end a bonus.
'to really live it - not just exist' is SO true!
i'M ALL FOR 'SLANT' (NEAR) RHYMES, BUT i DID FIND win/begin a stretch. Sorry, capslock.
A very pleasant read.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Hi, Jaq
This has a great summery fresh feel about it, with your positivity at the end a bonus.
'to really live it - not just exist' is SO true!
i'M ALL FOR 'SLANT' (NEAR) RHYMES, BUT i DID FIND win/begin a stretch. Sorry, capslock.
A very pleasant read.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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LOL, nothing get's passed you :). Glad you liked it. Thanks for your review Ray :) Jaq x
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On second thoughts, it's not such a bad rhyme after all, Jaq. It just didn't register right at first. xx
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:) x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend upon reading this poem I just had the urge to say amen I think this sums up the feeling of the poem and may sound daft well done on this write regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Hello my friend upon reading this poem I just had the urge to say amen I think this sums up the feeling of the poem and may sound daft well done on this write regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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No it doesn't sound daft at all Jill. :) Thanks for your very kind review :) Jaq x
Comment from Bindu Saxena
These are nicely woven lines.
I want to live this gift of life
a blessing that was given.
To really live it, not just exist
my idea of Heaven.
The artwork is fascinating.The poem has an underlying message of looking ahead and water under the bridge concept. which is therapeutic as evidenced by these lines: Release my dreams into today,
let my new life begin.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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These are nicely woven lines.
I want to live this gift of life
a blessing that was given.
To really live it, not just exist
my idea of Heaven.
The artwork is fascinating.The poem has an underlying message of looking ahead and water under the bridge concept. which is therapeutic as evidenced by these lines: Release my dreams into today,
let my new life begin.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your very kind review Bindu :) Jaq x
