My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 157 "A wordsmith extraordinaire."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from rama devi
Excellent tribute to TG and I agree. Well voiced, with strong tone and fine phrasing in free verse style. This is especialylu impacting-
People who cast stones
from houses of glass
may find a few cracks of their own.
(pun intended!)
Very fine presentation an composition overall.
I LOVE the new tist on the cliche phrase out of the box-
No box to think outside of
only one that hems them in
Brilliant!
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Excellent tribute to TG and I agree. Well voiced, with strong tone and fine phrasing in free verse style. This is especialylu impacting-
People who cast stones
from houses of glass
may find a few cracks of their own.
(pun intended!)
Very fine presentation an composition overall.
I LOVE the new tist on the cliche phrase out of the box-
No box to think outside of
only one that hems them in
Brilliant!
Love,
rd
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you do much for your very kind review Rama. Much appreciated as always. :) Jaq x
Comment from Earl of Oxford
I agree entirely with your comments about TG, and those thickoes who don't appreciate her gift, Jaq.
I haven't a clue what she's on about half the time, but due to her way with words and brilliant metaphores, I'm always glued.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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I agree entirely with your comments about TG, and those thickoes who don't appreciate her gift, Jaq.
I haven't a clue what she's on about half the time, but due to her way with words and brilliant metaphores, I'm always glued.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thanks Ray, I too am lost sometimes with Tammy's words, but it's a good lost, one where you want to find out more. :) Jaq x
Comment from October21
Hiya Jaq!
Loved the double meaning of the words in the lines of your first stanza. I find that poems without rhyme or meter seem to communicate better with readers- they're just words, easier to read and understand.
Thanks for sharing,
October
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hiya Jaq!
Loved the double meaning of the words in the lines of your first stanza. I find that poems without rhyme or meter seem to communicate better with readers- they're just words, easier to read and understand.
Thanks for sharing,
October
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much October, your review means a lot. :) Jaq x
Comment from Eliza M
I agree absolutely Jaq! People in glass houses should not throw stones. It is very unfortunate that there are a few on this site, who seem to gain some perverse pleasure in tearing others down for no good reason. How very sad as there are some wonderfully talented and genuine writers here, most of whom wish to learn and share with eachother. The exceptional Tammy is without a doubt very gifted and we are blessed to have her in our midst, as indeed is Mark.
Great expressive write sweetie. Liz.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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I agree absolutely Jaq! People in glass houses should not throw stones. It is very unfortunate that there are a few on this site, who seem to gain some perverse pleasure in tearing others down for no good reason. How very sad as there are some wonderfully talented and genuine writers here, most of whom wish to learn and share with eachother. The exceptional Tammy is without a doubt very gifted and we are blessed to have her in our midst, as indeed is Mark.
Great expressive write sweetie. Liz.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Liz there are some exceptional talents on here and they are all different, that's what I like about it. Yourself included. Maybe a wee bit of tolerance for each others differences wouldn't be such a bad thing. :) Jaq x
Comment from TammyGail
:) who couldn't love a little rant - I enjoyed this much Jaq like always your ink is something that always shines - your last two lines in this were indeed dead on - thank you ever much kind you are -
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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:) who couldn't love a little rant - I enjoyed this much Jaq like always your ink is something that always shines - your last two lines in this were indeed dead on - thank you ever much kind you are -
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Glad you enjoyed, it does the soul good to get things out there. :) Jaq x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend you have expressed your thoughts very clearly in this poem some people do critics others work give there opinion and rate it but when it comes to there work being criticized they don't like it I think I have got the meaning right forgive me if I am wrong sorry late review eyes aren't to good so have to keep resting regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hello my friend you have expressed your thoughts very clearly in this poem some people do critics others work give there opinion and rate it but when it comes to there work being criticized they don't like it I think I have got the meaning right forgive me if I am wrong sorry late review eyes aren't to good so have to keep resting regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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No problem Jill and you are correct in part. :) Thanks for your review. Please take care, Jaq xx
Comment from Ekim777
Well Tammy you do see clearly and see true and you have no patience for illusion and deception. Your images are beautiful, rich and truthful because you are fixed on that place life's sensations enter to be registered by your honest thinking. So although sometimes your images are so subjective no one can doubt their authenticity. I hope I am making sense. I reckon Jac Cee got it right. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Well Tammy you do see clearly and see true and you have no patience for illusion and deception. Your images are beautiful, rich and truthful because you are fixed on that place life's sensations enter to be registered by your honest thinking. So although sometimes your images are so subjective no one can doubt their authenticity. I hope I am making sense. I reckon Jac Cee got it right. -Ekim777
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Cheers Ekim, great review. :) Jaq x
Comment from kellymarino
Wow, I LOVE this beautiful piece of work. I totally agree with the message about how obnoxious some small-minded people can be when they cast judgment on the words of others. The reason poetry is so wonderful is that it can be written in any way the writer wishes, and the reader can see whatever meaning in it he/she desires.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Wow, I LOVE this beautiful piece of work. I totally agree with the message about how obnoxious some small-minded people can be when they cast judgment on the words of others. The reason poetry is so wonderful is that it can be written in any way the writer wishes, and the reader can see whatever meaning in it he/she desires.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you Kelly I just felt the need to say how I felt :) Jaq x
Comment from Spike the second
Hi Jaq
I totally agree, how the hell can people judge Tammys ink. We are all here for encouragement, with the odd recommendation from those more experienced like Tammy. A great poem and a great tribute. I know what I like and if I do not like something I move on. Why upset someone?
This website has opened my eyes to poetry I have not really read before and Tammy has the ilk of a Sylvia Plath. Who would tell her her work was poor?
Great stuff Jaq
Spike
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hi Jaq
I totally agree, how the hell can people judge Tammys ink. We are all here for encouragement, with the odd recommendation from those more experienced like Tammy. A great poem and a great tribute. I know what I like and if I do not like something I move on. Why upset someone?
This website has opened my eyes to poetry I have not really read before and Tammy has the ilk of a Sylvia Plath. Who would tell her her work was poor?
Great stuff Jaq
Spike
Comment Written 26-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Cheers Spike, I agree that no one can judge Tammy's ink. Her style is exceptional and unique. :) Jaq x
