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Viewing comments for Chapter 171 "Tomato Gloop!"
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Comment from adewpearl
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Great pairing of illustration and poem
Your poem is in excellent abcb rhyme
good consonance of soft S sounds in inside/slobbery
and alliteration in makes me
I love the vivid descriptive detail that adds so much to your humor
I LOVE tomatoes, but you had me convinced they are putrid LOL :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
    LOL, thanks Brooke, funny thing is I love tomato soup. I must just be fickle. Your review was very kind and informative. :) Jaq x
Comment from Scarbrems
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Ha ha, "inside is so slobbery" - well I love tomatoes, but that description is spot on. Great bit of fun to make me smile this morning. How's your Dad, by the way?

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2012
    He's still in hospital emsey, was meant to be out today but they are keeping him until next week. Thanks for asking. So glad the poem made you smile too :) Jaq xxx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is a good fun poem I love the art work to it enhances the poem very well my favorite are cherry tomatoes well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
    Thanks Jill I just fancied trying a wee bit of humour after a loooonnngggg day at work. :)Jill xx
Comment from Alexmi1984
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A funny poem about what I would call a "blemishy" fruit or vegetable is what I have just read and reviewed. I loved the humor with which you filled your lines and the way the poem flew easily and flawlessly.

Alex :)

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
    Thank you so much Alex, your review is much appreciated :) Jaq x
Comment from Joy Graham
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Oh dear! We all have something that we really don't like to eat. I think tomatoes would be in a lot of things. Do you not like ketchup? I had a friend once whose bf didn't like lima beans and dreamed they would chase him down the street. Now that's a nightmare.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
    Hahaha, funny thing is I love cream of tomato soup. I just don't like the texture or taste of fresh ones. :) Jaq x
Comment from MizKat
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Jaq Cee - This is a cute, humorous poem that I really enjoyed reading. I don't like tomatoes in sandwiches either, so I know where you're coming from. Kat

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
    I just felt that I would try humour as most of my stuff is dark :) Jaq xx Thanks for reading it.
Comment from Chris Tee
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Wow! You do not like tomatoes, I cannot believe it. This is an absolutely excellent fun poem and I had to smile a few times. Great job!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2012

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
    So glad I made you smile. I had hoped it would have that effect on people. Thanks for your review. :) Jaq x