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Comment from TammyGail
Excellent work crafting this Haiku and one about zombies at that :) your imagery matches your ink :( LOl but perfect for the holiday and the contest - thanks for sharing and best of luck
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Excellent work crafting this Haiku and one about zombies at that :) your imagery matches your ink :( LOl but perfect for the holiday and the contest - thanks for sharing and best of luck
Comment Written 12-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Cheers Tammy, much appreciated as always. :) Jaq x
Comment from doris1022
the dead spirit...nice zombie haiku achoo!! keep you chill on for the spooky!
I would recommned this to others!
gross picture....kinda mummytide!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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the dead spirit...nice zombie haiku achoo!! keep you chill on for the spooky!
I would recommned this to others!
gross picture....kinda mummytide!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Cheers Doris, glad you liked it :) Jaq x
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your Zombie Haiku is very well written with vivid imagery painted by an economy of words.
The art work you used is creepy cool.
You used excellent alliteration with the F words.
Your satori line is great.
I enjoyed all three lines:
Rotting, fetid flesh
undead corpses roam our streets
Halloween begins
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your Zombie Haiku style poem to other reviewers.
Missy.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Poet,
Your Zombie Haiku is very well written with vivid imagery painted by an economy of words.
The art work you used is creepy cool.
You used excellent alliteration with the F words.
Your satori line is great.
I enjoyed all three lines:
Rotting, fetid flesh
undead corpses roam our streets
Halloween begins
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your Zombie Haiku style poem to other reviewers.
Missy.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind words missy. :) Jaq x
Comment from sunnilicious
That is scary stuff. Decriptive little haiku. It packs quite a punch. Nicely done. Good work. And you meet the syllable count. Great. So good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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That is scary stuff. Decriptive little haiku. It packs quite a punch. Nicely done. Good work. And you meet the syllable count. Great. So good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your great review. :) Jaq x
Comment from azwildrosa
What a great haiku! Great description in so few words. You've met the requirements, thus making this a perfect entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in the booths.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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What a great haiku! Great description in so few words. You've met the requirements, thus making this a perfect entry. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in the booths.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Much appreciated.
Comment from terry drake
5-7-5 syllables count verse format challenge of seventeen syllables or less was successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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5-7-5 syllables count verse format challenge of seventeen syllables or less was successfully accomplished with your three line poem. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your really kind review as always.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this you have done very well using this form a creative fun poem I enjoyed good luck in the contest my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Yes I liked this you have done very well using this form a creative fun poem I enjoyed good luck in the contest my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Jill much appreciated.
Comment from c_lucas
The night of the dead
Featuring acts to dread
Horror is a past time
*********Unedited. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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The night of the dead
Featuring acts to dread
Horror is a past time
*********Unedited. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Love the one you've written. Thanks for your review.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from EMB
This is at terrific poem, whoever you are! And I'd really like to thank you for reminding me that The Walking Dead starts up again this Sunday. :D
The final stanza is six syllables, making this a total of eighteen syllables.
Still, a great poem.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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This is at terrific poem, whoever you are! And I'd really like to thank you for reminding me that The Walking Dead starts up again this Sunday. :D
The final stanza is six syllables, making this a total of eighteen syllables.
Still, a great poem.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thanks I will correct it now.
Comment from Dodey
Eeeek the picture is enough to scare the pants off someone lol..but so befitting the content of this great Haiku with wonderful clear imagery from your choice words.I love that I have learned a new word , having looked up the word Fetid...Thank you....I have never written a Haiku, only read of its form and believe there should be only 5 syllables in last line? I am reading 6...?
Best of Luck in the contest my friend..Kind Regards..Dee.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Eeeek the picture is enough to scare the pants off someone lol..but so befitting the content of this great Haiku with wonderful clear imagery from your choice words.I love that I have learned a new word , having looked up the word Fetid...Thank you....I have never written a Haiku, only read of its form and believe there should be only 5 syllables in last line? I am reading 6...?
Best of Luck in the contest my friend..Kind Regards..Dee.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thank you Dodey I have miscounted, will change that now.
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Your Welcome my friend.
I thought about it for you and
all I could come up with was to drop the'All' ...?
Dee.
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I've put in 'Halloween begins' hope that flows ok. Thank you once again.
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I went to read it and it's perfect ~Bravo.
Dee.
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Many thanks once again.x
