My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 175 "Dark Muse."All of my poems of release.
8 total reviews
Comment from mruss1
I thought I'd read one just to get started. I really don't have a muse but people like you sort are one. Your word usage is very effective and sometimes darkness rents space in my mind too:) Although my thoughts are never beaten down they always make their way to the page good or bad. This kind of reminds me of a piece I wrote quite a while ago The Web That I weave,because sometimes we make all this stufff come to life. great job my friend. Have to clean up but just wanted to start with one:) My word is very important to me. if I tell you something it is like money in the bank:) Take care and exceptional job:) Mark
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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I thought I'd read one just to get started. I really don't have a muse but people like you sort are one. Your word usage is very effective and sometimes darkness rents space in my mind too:) Although my thoughts are never beaten down they always make their way to the page good or bad. This kind of reminds me of a piece I wrote quite a while ago The Web That I weave,because sometimes we make all this stufff come to life. great job my friend. Have to clean up but just wanted to start with one:) My word is very important to me. if I tell you something it is like money in the bank:) Take care and exceptional job:) Mark
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Awww thank you so much Jaq x
Comment from sunnilicious
Satire is acceptable. Pondering thoughts can turn into a playground. Is right.... I don't know. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Satire is acceptable. Pondering thoughts can turn into a playground. Is right.... I don't know. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Excellent.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2012
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Thank you sunni for your kind review.
Comment from wordsareus
This is an excellent poem for the muse contest. The image and the back round give the poem a darkness that is also brought out in the words you chose.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This is an excellent poem for the muse contest. The image and the back round give the poem a darkness that is also brought out in the words you chose.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much wordsareus. Mostly people see a muse as joyful thing, I just wanted to show how I see it.
Comment from GRCwriter
Your poem has a very Stephen King feel to it, as he's said in interviews that he has a very happy life, but a very dark muse.
Good luck with your contest entry.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Your poem has a very Stephen King feel to it, as he's said in interviews that he has a very happy life, but a very dark muse.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing this, it is very much appreciated GRCwriter.
Comment from Peridot73
Hi there,
I do like this very much. I like the nefarious friend which puts a new slant on one's muse. I think we're inclined to think of muses as always bright and cheery. Great thought and clearly depicted. Lovely rhythm and artwork. :) Peridot
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hi there,
I do like this very much. I like the nefarious friend which puts a new slant on one's muse. I think we're inclined to think of muses as always bright and cheery. Great thought and clearly depicted. Lovely rhythm and artwork. :) Peridot
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Peridot, always appreciated.
Comment from EMB
This was a terrific poem. It had me thinking in ways I've never thought before. I mean, how DO you find the words to hasten away a dark muse when it seems such rebuke would fuel its power to stay?
This was deep on many levels.
Excellent work.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This was a terrific poem. It had me thinking in ways I've never thought before. I mean, how DO you find the words to hasten away a dark muse when it seems such rebuke would fuel its power to stay?
This was deep on many levels.
Excellent work.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much Edward.
Comment from Angels27
Hi Author...you have chosen a very different subject for your muse. The lines flowed smoothly and the feelings you wanted to express is stated eloquently. All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hi Author...you have chosen a very different subject for your muse. The lines flowed smoothly and the feelings you wanted to express is stated eloquently. All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thanks for your kind review Angels.
Comment from fastdigits
A walk on the dark side with
your muse artistically and
creatively constructed as
your mural spills down the
screen showing the underbelly
of inspiration.
Well done
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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A walk on the dark side with
your muse artistically and
creatively constructed as
your mural spills down the
screen showing the underbelly
of inspiration.
Well done
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this poem fastdigits. Much appreciated.
