Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

I like this one. It has sadness to it, but you can feel the love. I've never been in any contest where I didn't get at least one vote...This one seems to be my first. You have a wonderful write. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012

Thank you so much kiwi. I've had 1 where I didn't, it's soul destroying sometimes.

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 08-Oct-2012

well not exactly soul destroying for me thank goodness, but a wake up call that's certain...lol...I'm feeling kinda blah about love these days...maybe that has something to do with it. Yours is lovely...good luck.

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012

I guess 'soul destroying' is a bit of a hyperbole. LOL I do take it as another step in my learning curve.

Comment from MAMONIA

Excellent

How very sweet and sad, at the same time.
This is a beautiful love poem and says in
all in just a few words.
It is a wonder how so much can be said in
just 15 words. "my love, my life."
Fabulous entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012

Thank you so much for your kind words Mamonia.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

I thought the picture you chose to complement this little poem was great. You stuck to the requirements of the prompt. Not easy to do within 15 words. But you made a lovely love poem. Like a free verse. Best wishes for the prompt.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012

Thanks for your kind appraisal.

reply by robina1978 on 07-Oct-2012

so welcome, Ine

Comment from Angels27

Excellent

Such a beautiful lovelorn poem within 15 words. The picture compliments the writing so well. It's simple and eloquent. All the best in the contest. Enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012

Thank you for your great review.