Love in the rain
Free verse-see notes24 total reviews
Comment from terry drake
Tantalizing, the poem has the verse and story line to excite the reader. Your poem was simple and sweet and very complete as it was written.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Tantalizing, the poem has the verse and story line to excite the reader. Your poem was simple and sweet and very complete as it was written.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hello Terry, my friend, I appreciate your stop and am pleased to read your wonderful comments, thank you very much.
Comment from PedrosA5LeggedDonkey
"rain drops on your breasts"... Great opening! I can't give less than five stars to any writings that give me vivid visions of boobs.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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"rain drops on your breasts"... Great opening! I can't give less than five stars to any writings that give me vivid visions of boobs.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hello friend, I am glad you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from dmt1967
This is total love very well written and the photo spiderman one I think very well planned good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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This is total love very well written and the photo spiderman one I think very well planned good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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dmt my friend, I am pleased you like the write, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is very well written a beautiful short love poem that has so much feeling throughout good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Yes this is very well written a beautiful short love poem that has so much feeling throughout good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Jill my friend, I am glad you like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from Bobbi22
Very sensuous comparison of the raindrops to the dew drops. Nice play on words with peaches. Very well written love poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Very sensuous comparison of the raindrops to the dew drops. Nice play on words with peaches. Very well written love poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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RightPics my friend, I am pleased you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well, this should win you a few Kudo's with her. For a love poem its right up there. Very sexy and romantic for a 15 word poem. good luck in the competition,
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Well, this should win you a few Kudo's with her. For a love poem its right up there. Very sexy and romantic for a 15 word poem. good luck in the competition,
Comment Written 08-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2012
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Giddy my friend, I honored by your visit and delighted to read your wonderful comments, appreciate your time, thank you very much.
Comment from donaldww
This is an excellent love poem, written in only 15 words. The rain drops on your breasts are like dew on raw fruit.
Cheers,
good luck with the contest
DW
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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This is an excellent love poem, written in only 15 words. The rain drops on your breasts are like dew on raw fruit.
Cheers,
good luck with the contest
DW
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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DW my friend, I am honored and humbled by your visit and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from MissMerri
This strikes me as an exceptional creation beautifully composed to bring about a sensual response that is both strong and vivid. Very nice free verse love poem.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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This strikes me as an exceptional creation beautifully composed to bring about a sensual response that is both strong and vivid. Very nice free verse love poem.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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MissMerri my friend, I am delighted to read your wonderful comments and highly encouraged, I thank you for the visit and the kind, generous review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Love how you effortlessly turn breasts into peaches delicious enough to eat ...without sounding pornographic, except in our minds... LOL!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Love how you effortlessly turn breasts into peaches delicious enough to eat ...without sounding pornographic, except in our minds... LOL!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Phyllis my friend, I am honored and pleased by your visit, appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
Comment from adewpearl
What a wonderfully passionate poem that is fanciful in its imagery
There is a lovely sensuality with absolutely no crassness
:-) Brooke
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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What a wonderfully passionate poem that is fanciful in its imagery
There is a lovely sensuality with absolutely no crassness
:-) Brooke
Comment Written 07-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2012
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Your reviews are like icing on the cake my friend, I am very pleased to read your awesome comments and highly encouraged, I thank you kindly, God bless you.