My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 186 "You died for what?"All of my poems of release.
3 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Jaq, a very witty little poem and how true,it had great rhythm and flow through its entirety. Loved the format and visual. No matter what we think of the atrocities that occur in this world we can only control how we react and what we put out. regards James xx
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Hi Jaq, a very witty little poem and how true,it had great rhythm and flow through its entirety. Loved the format and visual. No matter what we think of the atrocities that occur in this world we can only control how we react and what we put out. regards James xx
Comment Written 02-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2012
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Very true James, how we react can change our lives. :) Jaq x
Comment from Jesse Bartek
i really enjoyed this poem of yours. it flowed very well and said a lot. it is a very sad world at times whats sadder is that it is because of us and like in the your poem we are just to blind to see. very good read thank you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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i really enjoyed this poem of yours. it flowed very well and said a lot. it is a very sad world at times whats sadder is that it is because of us and like in the your poem we are just to blind to see. very good read thank you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thanks for your kind words Jesse.
Comment from terry drake
Your poem is spiritual in nature and well written. The rhythm to your lines is blessed by well chosen rhymes to enhance your message. Very good.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Your poem is spiritual in nature and well written. The rhythm to your lines is blessed by well chosen rhymes to enhance your message. Very good.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind appraisal Terry. Much appreciated. Jaq x
