Comment from MidnightWriter4U

Excellent

Great nonet! Theme of work fascinating. Artwork very good fit for poem. Color scheme is consistent with mood of work. Reminds reader of daydreaming youth or an infant relaxed over a mother's shoulder staring into space just before falling asleep. Great job! I really enjoyed this work.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Thank you very much for your kind words and wonderful review.

reply by MidnightWriter4U on 01-Oct-2012

You are very welcome! :)

Comment from tango494

Excellent

Very well crafted nonet, I admire your creativness and the wonderful flow you were able to generate throughout. I also think the presentation, from the color choice to your picture selection was excellent as well.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Thanks for that I enjoyed trying this style out.

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

Your nonet poem spirals down to the theme of your poem and is disclosed in wonder. Your free verse expression has revealed your concerns and desires to be remembered. good job.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Much appreciated review, many thanks. Had fun trying out this style.

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

Good poem, interesting and relaxing to read. The color blue make the words stand out. All the rules of the contest were followed. Good luck.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2012

Thank you, my first attempt so I'm happy it reads ok.