Comment from RJ

Excellent

This is a very nice poem, and flows well. The feelings you have for your daughter speaks throughout your poem. She is special to have a mother like you as she starts her journey. Thank you for sharing. RJ

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2012

Thanks for your review RJ. She is my world. :) Jaq x

Comment from Eliza M

Excellent

The closeness with and love for your daughter, shines through each line of this touching piece Jaq. Though succinct, it speaks volumes. I'm sure she will treasure this.
Your poem flows freely and is powerful in its beautiful simplicity. Lovely. Liz.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2012

Thanks for your really lovely review Liz :) Jaq x

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

Children make life worth living. This poem says that to me and more. You wrote this with good flowing thoughts. I enjoyed partaking of it... John

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2012

Thank you so much for your kind review :) Jaq x

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh my friend this is very beautiful I am sure your daughter realizes how much you think of her and how much she plays a part in your life it is so obvious through this poem well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2012

Jill God bless you and thanks, once again, for your kind words. :) Jaq x

Comment from Meta~Mark

Excellent

As do I.
Smile Sweet
My darling child - wow how they grow up and the little darling is now ready to get married, what a bittersweet moment for you

excellent!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2012

Thank you Mark, that was her at 3 years old in the picture. Her own journey starts now, I have to just watch from the sidelines. I just hope I have equipped her with the life skills to cope. :) Jaq x