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Viewing comments for Chapter 192 "Night terror."All of my poems of release.
7 total reviews
Comment from CheyLGwriter
This is an awesome entry for the contest. It's also a great intro to the all hollows eve season. I really enjoyed the read. God Bless You in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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This is an awesome entry for the contest. It's also a great intro to the all hollows eve season. I really enjoyed the read. God Bless You in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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CheyL, thank you so very much.
Comment from RJ
Your picture and poem go so well together. Night itself scares me, so I could feel the shivers as I read your words. Good luck in the contest. RJ
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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Your picture and poem go so well together. Night itself scares me, so I could feel the shivers as I read your words. Good luck in the contest. RJ
Comment Written 29-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much RJ for your kind words.
Comment from Capricorn30
This picture reminds us so well that Halloween is near, I really like it--good selection!
Bats are one of many Halloween symbols, your septolet rhymes well as your fear is expressed
I have never,ever encountered bats--but I have heard that they can be rather frightening--so, hopefully, they will continue to avoid me!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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This picture reminds us so well that Halloween is near, I really like it--good selection!
Bats are one of many Halloween symbols, your septolet rhymes well as your fear is expressed
I have never,ever encountered bats--but I have heard that they can be rather frightening--so, hopefully, they will continue to avoid me!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much Capricorn30. They are a wee bit creepy.
Comment from MAMONIA
This is the first one I read that had
all the internal and external rhymes.
Good for you! It is a pleasure to review you.
This picture is great and compliments your
essence poem perfectly.
Great entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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This is the first one I read that had
all the internal and external rhymes.
Good for you! It is a pleasure to review you.
This picture is great and compliments your
essence poem perfectly.
Great entry.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 28-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is a good Halloween-ish type poem. I like it . The rhyming is done well and the internal rhymes are strong. The illustration you chose is a perfect match
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012
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This is a good Halloween-ish type poem. I like it . The rhyming is done well and the internal rhymes are strong. The illustration you chose is a perfect match
Comment Written 28-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012
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Thank you RYME4U for your kind critique.
Comment from oozer
In my view the best one i've read as yet here but my view might not be of any worth here. The scary sight in not without great beauty!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012
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In my view the best one i've read as yet here but my view might not be of any worth here. The scary sight in not without great beauty!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012
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Thank you oozer for your very kind appraisal. I'm sure your opinion is as valid as anyone's.
Comment from Spike the second
So far you are one of the only ones that has got the notion of internal rhyme. Nearly everyone else has missed it but got the end rhyme. It's very good.
Best of luck
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012
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So far you are one of the only ones that has got the notion of internal rhyme. Nearly everyone else has missed it but got the end rhyme. It's very good.
Best of luck
Comment Written 28-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012
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Thank you very much.
