Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

I hope not all of my dreams are memories, or I must have had a terrible past life, lol. Love the simplicity of this poem. Not an excess word in sight

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012

Thank you emsey, sometimes less is more. :) Jaq x

Comment from msmadeleine

Excellent

I love the picture you have used. Brilliant. I enjoyed reading your poem, but do you remember your dreams? Mine are gone in seconds. I do love dreaming, mostly, not always of course.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012

Thank you msmadeleine. I mostly remember the bad ones which I would rather forget. Good dreams allow you wake up happy tho', we should all be allowed them. :) Jaq xx

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

I really like this and the way you approached this topic as I believe you are indeed correct - that part of us which we hid from - eye common - we tend to tuck it in before the snooze only to wake bemused - we can't forget what is one with body and spirit - thanks for sharing it made for a great read -

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012

Cheers TG much appreciated :) Jaq x

Comment from saychirah

Excellent

Dreams are our memories that visit while we are asleep: true to some extent,then it becomes false.your article covers dream as a subject as well as possible because it tells us almost all we need to know about it.you are good.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012

Thanks for your kind words saychirah. :) Jaq x

Comment from prayingpoet

Excellent

Well, when I fall asleep tonight I will remember that dreams are our memories that visit us when we sleep! I will also try to cherish my dreams but not sure I want to keep them forever! Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012

Thanks for your appraisal Janice means a lot. :) Jaq x

Comment from zlp22

Excellent

I believe every dream has something to do with real life, I try to write down what I dream about and try to figure out what it means. Good word flow and picture, interesting topic.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2012

The ones I remember puzzle me and there is always just a segment of the forgotten ones that fleets through my head, but not enough to actually fully remember. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :) Jaq x

Comment from Charmane

Excellent

I really like this poem! It is full of joy and many memories. The author shared so much and his declarations sort of draws and keeps your attention. I like ...dreams because are our memories and they come creeping into our sleep as reminders.I remember my father so vividly telling and reading stories to me and my three brothers! He read until he fell asleep!Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012

Thank you Charmane for your lovely words, all appreciated greatly. :) Jaq x

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

I like both the content of this poem, and the tenor.
I particulary like the soothing, urging voice in the begining. Almost a lullabye.
Still not all dreams are soothing.
But I do get your message.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012

Thanks Lee for your very kind appraisal. :) Jaq x

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written on the subject of dreams they are memories that visit while we are sleeping as long as they are happy I don't mind long as they don't turn into nightmares well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2012

Indeed Jill, happy dreams are always welcomed in my sleep too. Thanks for reading and commenting my friend. :) Jaq x