The Rose Door
Free verse poem with occasional rhymes3 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
vivid and mood-creating detail
the passage where the queen drowns in a lake of tears is quite expressive and filled with heartfelt emotion
good use of occasional rhyme
good alliteration in linen lies
and veils of voile
you tell just enough of this story to make me feel for these characters and their loss :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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vivid and mood-creating detail
the passage where the queen drowns in a lake of tears is quite expressive and filled with heartfelt emotion
good use of occasional rhyme
good alliteration in linen lies
and veils of voile
you tell just enough of this story to make me feel for these characters and their loss :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2012
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Thank you for your very reassuring review, Brooke. I was a little worried it was too minimalist, but then am also aware how I do "carry on" a bit sometimes. LOL
Thanks again. Have a great weekend - Cally :)
Comment from Meta~Mark
this is a postive poem from others I have seen in the Behind The Door writing prompt..the rose door is as eloquent as the pic itself, well done!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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this is a postive poem from others I have seen in the Behind The Door writing prompt..the rose door is as eloquent as the pic itself, well done!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Thank you very Much :)
Comment from terry drake
So the king is wearing a lilac dressing gown; no wonder why the queen weeps. Your free verse poetry read well and your message was received.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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So the king is wearing a lilac dressing gown; no wonder why the queen weeps. Your free verse poetry read well and your message was received.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Ha ha! Thanks for making me chuckle - Cally :)