All That Glitters
Proverb 5-7-5 Contest Submission7 total reviews
Comment from justchillin
Superb choice of proverb, and beautifully portrayed with perfect lines. These few words so a lot, a great contest entry, well done xx
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Superb choice of proverb, and beautifully portrayed with perfect lines. These few words so a lot, a great contest entry, well done xx
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
Comment from harmony13
Excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The artwork was excellent and enhanced the read. This
poem was thought provoking and I loved the message.
Thank you....
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Excellent poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The artwork was excellent and enhanced the read. This
poem was thought provoking and I loved the message.
Thank you....
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
Comment from Matoshka
What a beautiful and true statement. All that glitters is not gold, what a fool. This applies to life so well. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
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What a beautiful and true statement. All that glitters is not gold, what a fool. This applies to life so well. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2012
Comment from ennahanid
Your Proverb 5/7/5 All That Glitters is very good. Ideal picture choice that compliments your words very well indeed.
The words are perfect and you say so much in so few and I wish you luck in the contest. Super proverb choice - Dinah
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Your Proverb 5/7/5 All That Glitters is very good. Ideal picture choice that compliments your words very well indeed.
The words are perfect and you say so much in so few and I wish you luck in the contest. Super proverb choice - Dinah
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Very good combination of picture and words. It never ceases to amaze me what can be said in as little as 17 syllables. You have told a story, stated a Proverb and an assessment of behavior all in 17 syllables. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Very good combination of picture and words. It never ceases to amaze me what can be said in as little as 17 syllables. You have told a story, stated a Proverb and an assessment of behavior all in 17 syllables. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
Comment from Linda Wilson
This is a great 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count is spot on, without being choppy. I like the artwork you chose to go along with the "Proverb! Best to you in the contest!
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This is a great 5-7-5 poem. The syllable count is spot on, without being choppy. I like the artwork you chose to go along with the "Proverb! Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was a great piece of poetry and very well done, good emotion good dimension and it tells a good story great haiku There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander Q*Q
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I thought this was a great piece of poetry and very well done, good emotion good dimension and it tells a good story great haiku There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. Alexander Q*Q
Comment Written 25-Jul-2012
