Romantic Love
Acrostic poem for contest18 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
fayesh: a good acrostic style poem. Very neat, good rhyme, well organized. Gets the point across, however, I do not feel it. It does not leave me with anything. About love and romance yet seems like directions to putting together a bookcase. Perhaps thawing out a little bit of those icy edges to your personality would allow your poetry to emit some feeling! Just a suggestion! Being madly in love at the moment, I'm hyper-sensitive to these feelings. Enjoy your day! livelylinda
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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fayesh: a good acrostic style poem. Very neat, good rhyme, well organized. Gets the point across, however, I do not feel it. It does not leave me with anything. About love and romance yet seems like directions to putting together a bookcase. Perhaps thawing out a little bit of those icy edges to your personality would allow your poetry to emit some feeling! Just a suggestion! Being madly in love at the moment, I'm hyper-sensitive to these feelings. Enjoy your day! livelylinda
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Sorry it took so long to respond to your review, but I do appreciate your words and the time you took to review my work.
Comment from amada
Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a very romantic work, as we read in stories of the past. The rhyming gives it a much special tone.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a very romantic work, as we read in stories of the past. The rhyming gives it a much special tone.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the congrats and the review.
Comment from Bobbi22
Such a romantic poem - Variety - the spice of life - not in the number of conquests but in the ways to please your love. Very well written.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Such a romantic poem - Variety - the spice of life - not in the number of conquests but in the ways to please your love. Very well written.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my acrostic poem.
Comment from Kasey Carroll
A great poem of romance. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is a great choice goes well with the poem. Your poem flows well easily understood.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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A great poem of romance. I enjoyed reading your poem. The picture is a great choice goes well with the poem. Your poem flows well easily understood.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem.
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Your welcome
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Your welcome
Comment from gifted$1
So nicely done. I love the fact that romantic love can still exist in a marriage. I kept seeing this as an older couple who still enjoy one another's company even though many years have gone by. What a great gift to have..two people still freshly in love. I like how you did the acrostic with the word..those are not easy to do! Great images as well. Nice work.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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So nicely done. I love the fact that romantic love can still exist in a marriage. I kept seeing this as an older couple who still enjoy one another's company even though many years have gone by. What a great gift to have..two people still freshly in love. I like how you did the acrostic with the word..those are not easy to do! Great images as well. Nice work.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem.
Comment from Lastamen
You've spelled it out in language all to clear to misunderstand. The attributes of romantic love fill our soul and lift our spirit. Well stated and expressed.
Till the last amen.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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You've spelled it out in language all to clear to misunderstand. The attributes of romantic love fill our soul and lift our spirit. Well stated and expressed.
Till the last amen.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem.
Comment from Bina1
So very nice, romantic and a lovely tribute to a marriage! Good luck in the contest, a fine entry. Love your art selection, an excellent presentation of your work.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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So very nice, romantic and a lovely tribute to a marriage! Good luck in the contest, a fine entry. Love your art selection, an excellent presentation of your work.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem.
Comment from Vladilynn
Hope you win! voted and enjoyed the read. This is a perfect acrostic and very powerful meaning.
It should be the perfect way, no need a changes even you're married. I really don't know why some people forgot it the really meaning of romance.
Well said
Love much,
Lynn:0)
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Hope you win! voted and enjoyed the read. This is a perfect acrostic and very powerful meaning.
It should be the perfect way, no need a changes even you're married. I really don't know why some people forgot it the really meaning of romance.
Well said
Love much,
Lynn:0)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Lynn, thank you for the 6 stars and the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem. F _ :)
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your Acrostic poem is beautifully written with marvelous imagery. The art work is gorgeous you used. Your Acrostic is in proper form. In your poem you used excellent descriptive writing, fine metaphor usage, great rhyme and very good alliteration usage. I enjoyed your LOVE lines: "Lots of sweet kisses then begin Open arms and hearts always win Variety, the spice of life Even a husband for his wife" I wish you good luck in the Romance writing prompt contest. I will recommend your lovely Acrostic poem to other reviewers. Fabulous day to you.
Missy.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Poet,
Your Acrostic poem is beautifully written with marvelous imagery. The art work is gorgeous you used. Your Acrostic is in proper form. In your poem you used excellent descriptive writing, fine metaphor usage, great rhyme and very good alliteration usage. I enjoyed your LOVE lines: "Lots of sweet kisses then begin Open arms and hearts always win Variety, the spice of life Even a husband for his wife" I wish you good luck in the Romance writing prompt contest. I will recommend your lovely Acrostic poem to other reviewers. Fabulous day to you.
Missy.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem.
Comment from Crackerberries
Romantic Love is a splendidly romantic acrostic poem. Great entry for the Romance writing prompt competition. Loved the artwork too and good luck to you.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Romantic Love is a splendidly romantic acrostic poem. Great entry for the Romance writing prompt competition. Loved the artwork too and good luck to you.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2012
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my acrostic romance poem.
